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imagin a place where open opens start starts begin begins spin spins stop stops knowing knows growing grows ending ends imagin having touched the very being of God where mystery is no mystery it is only a journey from the beginning to the end and infinity ask the questions which have already been answered as gods, what do we do then? give chance a chance violence freedom to roam choices now are chosen but a little less from the Throne and Freedom was born Freedom was like a son to God he brought him his greatest joy Freedom told stories of gladness that filled an empty voids Freedom made God a mystery and hid his angry face when ever Freedom was around all God was was grace one day God asked Freedom when will all this end Freedom looked perplexed and did'nt know where to begin God looked at Freedom and told him his glorious plan my son, i'm going to create a world and Freedom will never end

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Date: 5/5/2009 12:18:00 PM
What an experience to experience! Dear John, I fear now that as I am getting more into the stroke of the brush I am losing all sense in writing. But poems like yours always lift my spirits. Much love- Alley
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Date: 4/25/2009 10:05:00 PM
An interesting write John. I am behind in reading a lot of your poems but again a powerful write. Phyl
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:21:00 PM
Brother john, before the throne of God, and walking away with a philosophy of how it should be ... imaginatively powerful. Let freedom ring.
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Date: 4/18/2009 1:09:00 PM
a gem -this is a gem-your friend charma
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Date: 4/18/2009 10:08:00 AM
This is truly a treasure here, John !! I love all your "imagines" ... smile ... I AM that I AM and arn't we all ... more smiles ... What a wonderful write ... I love it !!! I'm adding it to my favorites.
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:09:00 AM
Your take on a spiritual possibility? Or, your personal belief? Love the unique perspective here. You wrote Adventure in your adjective category so perhaps you are simply writing a combination of daydream and hope. Forgive me if I got it all wrong. Especially love the ending. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/17/2009 5:14:00 PM
Loved this poetry. It says hope always prevail... I write alot of poetry all the time and I wanted to share my Gateways poem before I started to sound religous. First to see who I was and still a little.... Enjoyed this piece and I hope you will have an open mind to the poems backed by scriptures I will place on here soon. Have a great day.
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