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Within the depths of a sinful soul,
The deceiver takes on the hypocritical role.
From the outside a deception of holier than thou,
With empty promises and blasmalicious vow.

Affluent for the demons  to possess,
The hypocrites who sinfully transgress.
Poisonous lies gliding from forked tongue,
Trophies collected and artfully strung.

Why conceal such a hideous soul,
Evilness relishes the easy control.
Smiles tainted saccharine sweet,
Humanity fades with a cowardly retreat.

Apathetic eyes if you should meet
void of feelings filled with conceit
Mourn not for the horrendous loss,
It's the price paid, a soullessness the cost.

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 AM
    They're all around us. Some intense wording in this write. Nice Write Poet!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:25:00 PM
    LISA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:34:00 PM
    WHoa Lisa! This is a deep poem. 'blasmalicious'- I like that, it embodies all that is evil and filled with badness. One has to be a hyporite to deceive, and the tongue does indeed play a tremendous role. Very well written poem!