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Hurt

My hurt that can't be seen
The pain that came
At the end of my dream

It's presense, a horrible thing
I want to let go
But it just seems to cling

It's maker, still walking around
Unaware of my worries
How hard I feel down

I need to hate
But love gets in the way
It holds my rages and makes me to 
stay

Am I the fool
That you want me to be?
It isn't cool what was done to me

What should come 
At the end of a dream?
When the star has been broken and 
ruined the theme

I will survive
But just this one thing
I'm letting go if you can't fix this 
dream

(Dedicated to Colleen Bono)

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  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:22:00 PM
    yet again I had to read.how's moving?take care.

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:35:00 PM
    I think that spiritual connection stay with a person for a life time. Nicely written. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:17:00 AM
    have you thought about entering this in the dedication contest?

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 9:16:00 AM
    hope moving is going well for you.I still swear you moved it down a line.

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:32:00 PM
    You also moved the (ruined the theme) down a line.took a minute to see it.

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 4/8/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Its on you mobil that it apeares that way. It has not been changed.
  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:29:00 PM
    I went straight here.I knew it.You are to kind.thank you so much.This one just really has stuck to me.Happy moving

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 2:21:00 PM
    had to stop by and say hello.hope you are doing ok.having a hard day today as yesterday was my dad's birthday and I miss him so much.take care.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:48:00 AM
    still have to read this again.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:01:00 AM
    you are one of the few poetry writers on here that I read and always have to take a second glance... your sincerity comes across so strong and seem like a wonderful person God bless you John and keep writing cause it gets better i promise I truly enjoy and am greatly inspired by your writings hugs Maddie

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 11:26:00 PM
    I almost have it memorized.

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 4:32:00 PM
    the more I read this the more it creeps me out that I havent been on for so long and havent been reading alot.Something made me come and look. life is funny sometimes.Thank you.

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 2/13/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Our spiritual connection.
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Well that's a 7,,, thank you for reading " bible stories,,, I never called them gods. I wasn't there . you have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 2/13/2013 12:47:00 PM
    This is so appropriate for me right now.Something just told me to get on here and look around.Hope life is treating you well.

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 2/13/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    then it's for you this was writen.
  1. Date: 2/11/2013 6:16:00 AM
    i need to.hate but love gets in the way.Tnks God that love keeps getting in the way especially when we re angry enough at something to make us in need of hate.Tnks God we re not able to hate cos its love which gives us freedom and hate which drags our soul.Powerful poem we all can relate to.at times.nn

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 6:00:00 PM
    I need to hate but love gets In the way...I love this line..seems to be the story of my life. Loved this

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:11:00 PM
    You described well that hurt you feel, john. I loved the part: I need to hate, but love gets in my way.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 1:26:00 PM
    Tomorrow is a new day, John. - Over time, the pain fade - Well written - I wish you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 9:51:00 AM
    You are right, John, especially at our age, it is time for contentment and joy, not drama and frequent hassles. love and hugs, catie :)