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Hunters and the Sea

Below earth, streams release the arteries of the undersea teeming with precious abalone, granite and shells, as a roulette of lotus defies gravity soaking on the chlorine of a wind only piles of sand can bestow… and gentle the wavelets murmuring hymns of serenity , somewhat delicate as ocean mouth is to fish lips in the moist pulse of swelling spaces for wooden fleets to beckon the blue. Like so, guardian of water observes the cruise of a ship rustling a masthead… intrusive vessels are aliens to the underworld: greedy eyes, black hands that rake mothers of pearl and babes of dolphins. Fierce dugongs roll along, shaking the basement of hunters’ boats on inlets to pound doors of Neptune’s bed, reflecting mirrors of an island scented with coconut and tresses of women bathing along coasts of such innocent gulfs. Below earth, a divide between friends and foes is honored; that beyond words, a sea keeper rises to acknowledge the kindness of strangers, if they are kind enough to respect the gift of privacy. 10/2/2015 Chase Trevi's Contest: Open Sea - Sailing, Creatures, Treasures

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Date: 10/23/2015 3:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write nette!
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Date: 10/22/2015 9:47:00 PM
Congrats Nette on your winning write, so full of imagery!
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:24:00 PM
Congrad's on your win a great sea story! Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2015 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:24:00 PM
Awesome write, I love watching the boats and standing by the peirs when I live by the Oregon coast. :)
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Date: 10/10/2015 2:19:00 PM
Top write on the briny blue; imagism true.' 'Netting' a feast into which I am pleased to be getting' now without more ado I bid you toodle-loo..'
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Date: 10/6/2015 10:41:00 AM
An excellent nature poem and entry for the contest my very dear friend, Nette. I'm always fascinated by your writes and I'm always, proud of you. A winner for me! Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your loving greetings and wishes on my birthday. Btw, I'll be going out of country for 2wks, first to macao to visit my bro. and sis-in-law then if we've time, go to phil. I'll contact you if in case I'll be there ok. Again, thank you soo much. love lots and hugs,Leonora
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Date: 10/4/2015 6:51:00 AM
An epic story full of glorious images told in poetry form as only you can do.
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Date: 10/3/2015 8:05:00 PM
Hi Nette, this was so appealing to me came back for a second read!
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Date: 10/2/2015 3:51:00 PM
Nette, this is outstanding in a way only you can do 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your senses contest, I am honored. ..
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Date: 10/2/2015 8:10:00 AM
This is not a poem but a Thesis on poetry, dear nette! Captivating, informative, mesmerizing writing! Good luck!
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Date: 10/2/2015 5:02:00 AM
- A thought-provoking in your lines, great written Nette! - I wish you good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2015 12:28:00 AM
Nette, I loved how you weaved nature and a message into one. hugs
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Date: 10/1/2015 11:17:00 PM
I am reminded of my childhood days when the rivers were pristine and almost revered.A treasure of a poem!
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Date: 10/1/2015 5:08:00 PM
This will do very well in the contest nette. An exceptional entree. Love your descriptions and realtionships to the sea.
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:05:00 PM
Very descriptive and a good message to take care of the sea..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:01:00 PM
An A-1 poem! We plunder nature who nourishes us. Leave the sea alone; we don't have enough water and pure oceans for the next generation! Thank you, Nette
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:54:00 PM
great poetry nette, love last line! Am hoping to bring out book with mostly tanka and other poems. May have to self publish though, such few free presses anymore. Thanks for asking, Nette! We seem to get each other!
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