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How Could You

how could you say you love me and crush my heart so bad why would you treat me so and make me feel so sad i don't deserve what you give i've given you my body and soul but yet you walk all over me and my heart has to pay the toll i surrendered to you fully you thought i'd forever be around but now i'm saving my mending heart for the new love that i've found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/12/2013 9:57:00 PM
I had already made a comment but got booted grrrr. I know I said I like this poem. It is a sad theme, but well written. I relate too much to the theme I think. Great work.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:47:00 PM
thank you for the review !glad you enjoyed
Date: 2/5/2013 8:42:00 PM
This sounds like a song. If you repeated a few verses, maybe it could be. I like it.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 9:32:00 PM
thank you glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 2/5/2013 7:09:00 PM
A brave and deeply felt piece. Very nice writing. Jack
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 9:32:00 PM
thank you very much for the kind words
Date: 2/5/2013 6:59:00 PM
Glad I made you laugh April. Rick
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 9:31:00 PM
oh how sweet!yes you did!have a pleasant night!
Date: 2/5/2013 1:14:00 PM
S taste of revenge.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 1:17:00 PM
lol glad you liked!
Date: 2/5/2013 10:33:00 AM
Dear April, Well, Spring is around the corner your name will find its mach Not only in name but also in love! Of course you know that is better to love And lose than not to love. Consider also that your new love, who is around the corner, Never would be possible if the old one was still there! Your poem, although painful It screams with beauty and love! Wonderful!
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM
I love this review!and thank you very much for the kind and true words!appreciated very much!glad you liked it
Date: 2/5/2013 12:32:00 AM
Sad, sincere, lovely poem written from the heart.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/5/2013 5:40:00 AM
thank you very much!

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