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FORGIVENESS

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

How could we be ever forgiven oh Lord when we constantly your holy creation destroy? (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 30 September 2016

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Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2016 1:32:00 PM

Education is one of the keys. We only have one Earth and must respect her.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/30/2016 3:19:00 PM

Yes, right education is the right way, my friend, Tim! Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2016 1:26:00 PM

- Sadly, mankind has abused God's beautiful gift to such a degree that the earth is now in the process of being destroyed - Humans continue to consume our planet's resources faster than these can be renew naturally - Will people destroy the earth completely? - " ... Though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow, though they be red like crimson, they shall be as the white wool." - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/30/2016 3:20:00 PM

Very analytic comment and to the point my friend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much!

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/30/2016 7:04:00 AM

Should not be forgiven ... The destruction goes on seeking forgiveness and repeating ... Forgiveness is always forthcoming ... Destruction is perpetual ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/30/2016 11:52:00 AM

Probir, my friend, I see everywhere saying that God forgives and I say, Yes, He does, but this doesn't give us the right to sin and to commit crimes against the Cosmic Order! Thank you so much my friend!