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tri- angle angle i am the triangle this is the shape that eventually becomes the roof triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle i am a triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle i am the triangular roof of the rectangle below perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter e r r e i t m THIS IS A RECTANGLE e e I AM THE HOUSE m t door i e door r r door e perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter p GROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDPAVEMENTGOURNDGROUNDGROUND grassgrassgrassgrassgrassgrassgrassgraDRIVEWAYgrassgrassgrassgrassgras

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/13/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thoughtful!
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Date: 8/12/2017 10:51:00 PM
You combined the visual art to the poem, making it a masterpiece. congratulations.
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:42:00 PM
This is an interesting form. Clever and well written. I suppose congratulations are in order!!Asavvy1
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Date: 6/15/2012 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Juli. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2012 12:18:00 AM
congrats on your win Juli.
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Date: 6/14/2012 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem!!!
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Date: 6/14/2012 6:28:00 PM
Congrats, Juli. Excellent. Very clever. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/14/2012 5:38:00 PM
JULI, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD
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Date: 12/5/2011 3:27:00 PM
A house of cards with much deep walls... I like the way you writel... Michael
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:42:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.
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Juli- Michelle
Date: 1/3/2012 6:22:00 PM
thank you if you want you can look at more of peoms
Date: 12/2/2011 8:46:00 PM
OKay, So I've tried everything and the right perimeter for the house won't format right, even though on the edit screen it looks fine :( Sorry bout that =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 11/30/2011 2:27:00 PM
* "I Love Fun Sweet Poem * My Dear Beautiful Juli-Michelle * Such A Precious Heart Would Craft Something As Adorable As This * Knock Knock Knock * Tis Your Beauty Home * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *
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Juli- Michelle
Date: 12/2/2011 8:47:00 PM
Thank You Sarah! <3 =Juli=Michelle=

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