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Honey Hive

Bee on white petals
warm lips sucking sweet nectar
with most loving care
protecting this wild flower
which was born to be his own

(inspired by Ruben Ortellao-Poem ( Pollinator)

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  1. Date: 6/4/2010 5:12:00 AM
    Very pretty!! Enjoyed reading today. I like to get inspiration from other artist.

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 7:05:00 PM is your "pollinator" !! :)

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 2:55:00 PM
    When you look at honey bees' as they caress the flowers, it makes you want to believe that's the us humans should react to each other >> lovely poetry >> James

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 12:04:00 PM
    It is good to be inspired by another.... It must have been good for you to create one like this,,,, Good work my friend....:JP]

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 3:01:00 AM
    I absolutely loved your title for this one, Celene! and enjoyed this tanka too--you sure brought very nice images to mind with this one...:)

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 1:56:00 PM
    Sweet honeyed tanka! It's going to my fav's.

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 1:15:00 PM
    What A Vivid and Endearing Picture You Paint... And I Love The Allegory... Beautifully Done... MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 11:51:00 PM
    beautiful poetry enjoy your day!:)

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 7:12:00 AM
    Nice!!! I'm so happy you like my choka, Celene! Great tanka. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 6:55:00 AM
    Prettiest tanka. All the best.

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 6:05:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Celene. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/22/2009 5:39:00 AM
    Beautifully done. Just imagine being the bee or the flower carefree. Keep writing. Sara