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Home foreclosure

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Home foreclosure

Sudden, unexpected 
letters
The loan weighing my 
shoulders
Now indeed gravity has 
won
Here i am down on my 
knees
Caught between pillars of 
depression
Confussion well relaxed 
in my brains
Grains of sorrow 
germinates
Raising sterms and fruits 
of tribulation

It feels like failure
How will i tell my spouse
Caught in amnesia
Speechless, Tongue dried 
Like my mouth has 
suffered drought

Expenses show no mercy
No remorse only cruelty
Banks singing "I'm empty"
Indeed i feel empty
Call a friend to help out??
No
I can't double my loans

Home foreclosure
Where is my brother,
Where is my sister,?
I feel down and out
A knocked out kick-boxer.

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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 12:39:00 AM
    Many congratulations Godwins xx

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 8/1/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Thank You for entering my contest

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 8/1/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's a pleasure Judy:)
  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:49:00 AM
    It's sad how many are going through this. Congrats.

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 8/1/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir
  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:08:00 PM
    Your heart is bleeding here Godwin amazing write, heartfelt and close to the heart, congratulations on your winning poem xxx

    Piyo Avatar Godwins Piyo
    Date: 7/31/2013 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, thank you Mystic Rose!! :D:)