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Collab with Justin Connor --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The man that picked me up in the streets Quickly became my best friend in the world My ears prick when I hear him calling Daily I am in the kitchen faster than lightening Wagging my tail brightly I used to be on the streets— A place I never liked and was always afraid of Thanks to this man I don’t have to be scared anymore I used to feel the cold in my bones And watch the cars speed around me in fright I used to try and say hi to the passersby But they only glanced at me and sighed When he took me in the house was warm My paws felt comfy on the carpet floor And there was FOOD—delicious food! Piled nicely for me in a big red bowl Then I met his wife and daughter They were so happy to see me! I had not even been there for a day And suddenly I was part of their family I feel at home! Napping on the couch with my best friend And my two new cuddle buddies Their soft, gentle hands stroking my head A feeling like no other A sensation I had never dreamt of in my past life A new warmth—known as comfort and leisure I think I will stay here For I am their new treasure as they are mine I like the way I light up the daughter’s face Every morning I wake her and lick her cheek To her smile and an occasional giggle It is so wonderful to feel this joy sweeping through me It is almost electrifying because of its newness And leaving them would be a shame! Besides, where would I go? Instead I must focus my mind on the delightful food! Or the chewy TOYS that the mother brought one day Or their BACKYARD with the funny pigeons! And especially focus on them, my family! Being on the street for a long time I never thought I would find A place where kind people would love me for what I am A place where I would never go hungry A safe place to keep me happy and warm A place called home I am home!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/28/2014 3:43:00 PM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifing Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/5/2014 11:31:00 AM
Very nice. Never did a collaboration poem, might be something to try. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2014 9:40:00 AM
very poignant and lovely Laura congrats Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:40:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Laura
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest, Laura! :)
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:08:00 PM
Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. YOU and Justin make a fine pair of collaborator
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Date: 9/11/2012 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful verse...a heartfelt rendering I am sure. Throw-away pets, throw-away children...when will it ever end. How wonderful someone cared enough to make a home for this lost one called, "Man's Best Friend!". Cynthia
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/11/2012 6:53:00 PM
Thanks a lot. =)
Date: 9/10/2012 9:09:00 PM
Laura, a wonderful collaboration.... home sweet home... xox~pd
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/11/2012 6:52:00 PM
Thanks for reading! :) ~Laura
Date: 9/9/2012 12:55:00 PM
I can relate to this creature - This piece increases my recent motivation to find a new cat for my home once I established a more stabalizsed financial situation - I regularly visit the local pet store and give the cats some energy - this is a nice gentle poem that we all can relate to - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/10/2012 1:40:00 AM
Oh really? Well, I hope you do find your feline companion soon. Cats are wonderful pets! :) --And thanks!
Date: 9/6/2012 4:43:00 AM
Glad that there is someone who can give them a home and love. Very nice writing, Laura. - Have a great Thursday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/11/2012 6:54:00 PM
Thanks! =-P

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