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Spirituality is a tool for inner peace of the mind. Acquire faith rather than admonish obedience. Truthfulness is akin to the craving for faith in God. Religion is a regimen of holy books yet entice. Our spirits have a safe-house hideout asylum. You are owed nothing but relief and happiness. Happiness exists within, in simple venture aim. Soul has been included in the core; it is ageless. Happiness, you can have it due to your choice. When we admit we are souls, we are still at rest. The organism integrates whirlwind and experience. When the devil leads us astray adrift, we are lost. Almighty and ourselves motivate our thinking. Also, we need different ways to be content, healthier. We endeavor to pursue those individuals' well-being. Believe in God still! We will be pure and happier. Nothing on the planet can influence or upset us. Burst through grips with your inner inward spirit. Artistry is what you need; Dance if you need this. Gratitude would implement them for you to covet. Discover immortality by using your limited body. Welcome those who can be dutiful to your light. Am I here, or have I encountered the clemency? If they attempt to persuade you into their own twilight. Dance alone may not enhances your pleasure. You only exist to liberate your body swift soul. All reward emanates from what you nurture. All holy books asseverate on this similar role. The soul is not substitutable to your own self. If the loss of some things doesn't make a variance. You will not live for long, even mythical belief. You are not dead till the soul dissipates in space. To review confidence, expectation, and freedom. You gaze at the world of the souls while in the stillness It is your resort, whether to savor your time. The divine mystery is beyond your consciousness. There is only one oneness, God, that exists forever. What if we've made it to the theology wisdom sundry? God is honored in every religion, and he is singular. What if the devil was the one-of-a-kind of the country? What if you lived only to be halcyon when at your death? What if the first being to lay on the moon was blind? What if we share the same religion and the same breath? What if all our holy books were written just by humankind? What if the poor are in control of wealth and power? What if robots were to take over as a substitute for humanity? What if all the water in the oceans were by fish devour? What if we buy joy with money? Will you care about money? What if no one hears a sound? Does it still exist? What if we cannot have quietness without sadness? What if you could shape your future just as you covet? What if you could alter a horrific event in world chorus? What if your mother never gave you parturition? What if you could lavish your life never needing to sleep? What if you stay live forever and the earth remained haven? What will you do with the surplus hours each day you keep? Written: May 22, 2021 Religion Or Spirituality Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/23/2021 11:42:00 AM
What if this is the best poem I’ve read all week, well it is Lasaad, you give great balance between spirituality and religion, you tabulate both beliefs and questions, quite extraordinarily, I’m agnostic myself but can quite easily relate to both arguments, even if left with “what if”, splendid writing Lasaad, cheers David
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Date: 5/23/2021 12:32:00 PM
Dear David, Your benevolent words lighted my most profound feelings, and I'm genuinely appreciative that you enjoyed my sonnet. You know, sometimes we get brought someplace down the subject, and the waves take us far without knowing whether we genuinely did it well. Bringing up those, imagine a scenario where issues are the unadulterated motivation behind the verse, particularly about the norm.
Date: 5/23/2021 8:23:00 AM
Really solemn dialogue, Lasaad. Much to gleam and think about in these words of wisdom. Well done!
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Date: 5/23/2021 9:41:00 AM
A pleasure to know you, Vijay. Your kind words ignited my deepest emotions, and I'm sincerely grateful that you liked my work.
Date: 5/23/2021 4:35:00 AM
A profound spiritual and philosophical poem that enlightens the seeker of truth, my dearest friend, Lasaad! A true masterpiece! God bless you!
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Date: 5/23/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Dearest friend Demetrios, Glad you love my writing. You are so encouraging and pleased my writing makes the points that you like.
Date: 5/22/2021 11:41:00 PM
Your arguments are solid and one must strive for spirituality. A great poem.
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for your supporting words Victor, appreciate your kindness.
Date: 5/22/2021 3:46:00 PM
Many interesting theories and questions you have penned in this one. What religion are you? Thanks for your visit to my page.There is a poem that says something like "lying in bed with the what if running through my head". Your work reminded me of that. Sara
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Date: 5/22/2021 5:12:00 PM
Your words of kindness strike a happy chord in my Heart Sara. I thank you for your encouragement and support. Be blessed, and have a wonderful weekend
Date: 5/22/2021 3:44:00 PM
You have created a superlative, engrossing poem, which probes the depths of humanity's innermost beliefs, Lasaad. Wonderfully written. Best of wishes for contest, Evelyn
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Date: 5/22/2021 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn your Feedback is very much appreciated, you know in some cases we get taken somewhere down the subject and the waves take us far without knowing if we really did it well, your wonderful input was comforting, have a great weekend.
Date: 5/22/2021 3:07:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, You've penned a deep and thought-provoking write. “What IF” came to my mind as I read this well-written write. All of the questions presented in this write were profound. Best wishes in the contest. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/22/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis , Your kind words have been so heartwarming, and very supporting, all my best wishes and warm hugs. Have a peaceful weekend
Date: 5/22/2021 11:56:00 AM
Powerful verse Lasaad, it does make you question everything in life. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 5/22/2021 12:11:00 PM
Your visit to my page is very appreciated, dear Tom; anything is open to doubt because we exist in a state of perpetual uncertainty. Have a nice day Tom
Date: 5/22/2021 11:34:00 AM
I enjoyed this write, Lasaad. The "what if" would make a stand-alone poem in themselves. Poetry, I think, should always raise questions, especially about the status quo.
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Date: 5/22/2021 11:41:00 AM
Thank you kindly dear Milton, you know in some cases we get taken somewhere down in the subject and the waves take us far without knowing whether we truly did great or not, yet your remark was empowering

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