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His Day Had Come

His day had come, and so He went and prayed. The woes of all mankind upon him weighed. His brethren slept; He knew what would befall. His enemies conspired and did not stall. A midnight kiss, and He would stand betrayed. First seized, reviled, then stripped and flayed; A scarlet robe on broken flesh then laid, He bore the brutal cross and drank the gall. His day had come. A final breath. . . . the sacrifice was made. The land then quaked. God’s sorrow was displayed. The Son in linen. . . . on the earth a pall. But in the sepulcher, His final call – To conquer death! Man need not be afraid. His day had come! Submitted 3/12/23 for the Easter Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 5/10/2023 6:38:00 AM
An outstanding write, resurrection transcending death, demonstrating the potential in each of us, that we too may one day, be as He. Apart from Jesus and Sri Yukteswar Giri, I’ve not come across any documented examples of resurrection, although I’m sure there will be.
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Date: 5/9/2023 1:57:00 PM
Belated congratulations Andrea. This is so well done and a perfect testimony to your faith. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/8/2023 3:43:00 AM
I don't think man has feared well ever since. Great to see we're off to other planets to do the same.
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Date: 5/5/2023 7:12:00 PM
Very compact, very concise telling of his final day. Excellent!
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Date: 5/2/2023 4:55:00 AM
Andrea, forgive my absence over the last few months and not having read this one. Our faith in God and the reason for the death of His Son, should always be acknowledged.
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Date: 4/29/2023 11:32:00 AM
STRONG EMOTIONAL POEM. NICE POTD.
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Date: 4/27/2023 8:19:00 AM
Nicely penned poem. Jesus uses no weapons, but only forgives, and His human followers destroy via weapons the whole earth.
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:27:00 AM
Nicely penned...I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:19:00 AM
Back to say congratulations for Best New Poem!
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Date: 4/10/2023 9:51:00 PM
I love your spiritual writings and I love your rondeaus... straight to my Favs
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John Watt
Date: 4/11/2023 9:46:00 PM
Life has been very full, my friend. No energy left at the end of the day to read or write!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/11/2023 12:09:00 AM
wow, so nice of you, john. Where have you been? I miss you here!
Date: 4/8/2023 1:39:00 PM
Andrea, I love this poem! Yes, Christ day had come and you expressed it so simply and so lovely! Congratulations you are so worthy of your placement. I always think of the pain God felt watching His only begotten son, keep His integrity till death. Proved Satan a liar and saved us. Congrats again . I wrote of Memorial o His death
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Date: 4/8/2023 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Yes, "His day had come."  "Happy Easter" with blessings................
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Date: 3/16/2023 8:07:00 AM
Beautifully penned.
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Date: 3/15/2023 7:06:00 AM
Going straight to my faves, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/14/2023 1:23:00 PM
A wonderful, powerful expression of faith Andrea. One of my favorites.
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Date: 3/13/2023 4:43:00 AM
His day is coming again Andrea, thank you For posting this..I am wondering is there a way To instill the Bible in a i permenantly? Or Flood the airwaves with it. ' maybe we should Pray that into existence ??
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Date: 3/13/2023 3:24:00 AM
Excellent poem, displays the most important of the events of the passion.
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Date: 3/12/2023 9:50:00 PM
He is risen, and we shall bow down to him. Beautifully written, Andrea. I loved it :)
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Date: 3/12/2023 3:02:00 PM
Excellent, Andrea. "He has risen."
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