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Hint of Fall

Descending acorns Now under a hunters moon Falling with a plunk (Haiku Me Some Nature, Please contest ) Written by Laura McKenzie

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Karen Croft

Date: 7/31/2013 11:17:00 AM

I love haiku. Very nice!

Date: 9/17/2011 8:32:00 PM

Like the sound imagery in the last line. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 9/6/2011 1:30:00 PM

Dear Laura, Many congratulations on your super win in Constance's contest. Wonderful Haiku you have written. So nice to see you here at the soup again. I am away for awhile, devoting my time to writing a novel. Thank you for your recent kind comments on my sonnet 'A Gift From God'. Elaine

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance La France's "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" contest Laura. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the "Haiku Me Some Nature, Please" poetry contest sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2011 8:27:00 PM

great title for this little acorn gem, Laura! congrats on your win.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/4/2011 2:57:00 PM

love the sound effect! congratulations on your win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/4/2011 2:51:00 PM

Congrats Laura! Kim

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/4/2011 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. love phyl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest,Laura

David Williams

Date: 9/4/2011 5:15:00 AM

hey Laura congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2011 11:29:00 PM

Congrats Laura on your wonderful winning piece ..a stunning poetry entry for this contest my friend.. superbly penned luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 10:03:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck in Constance's contest..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

James Fraser

Date: 9/3/2011 8:24:00 AM

The fall is not far away Laura. It seems to have appeared quicker this year, mainly as we never really had a summer. You sure have captured this lovely season through your words. Good luck in the contest, have a lovely weekend :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/2/2011 7:01:00 PM

yes I can almost hear those acorns 'falling with a plunk' in fall :) good luck in the contest...

Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:50:00 PM

Thank you ! :)

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 9/2/2011 9:06:00 AM

Wonderfully visual and in perfect form. Excellent! Michael

Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:50:00 PM

Thank You for your words of encouragement ! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2011 12:49:00 AM

Laura, sweet can't wait. Thank you for sharing your haiku, have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:49:00 PM

Thank You!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 7:00:00 PM

breathtaking view Laura .. feeling those acorns plunk as they do in my neck of the woods NJ.. perfect entry my friend..good luck..and oh so nice to see and hear from u luv... what has been going on with u? miss miss miss..

Laura Mckenzie
Date: 9/2/2011 7:49:00 PM

Linda thank you my sweetie!!!! :)