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Hidden Treasures

Dawn paints the clouds with Hazy washes bright with Diamond dew. Winter sadness melting In the fledgling sunlight. Spring crocus reflecting Saffron, pearl and purple Jewels sparkling In the swirling silver Threads of misty morning. Snowdrops capped in valour Bravely rise through strands of Emerald moss Bluebells drape the woodland Floor with lapis splendour. Daffodils alight with Gold and citrine blazing. Nature’s promise Cherry blossom floating On the quickening breeze. Hidden treasures waking To the warmth of springtime. Feel the heartbeat Rhythm pulsing with the Sense of life emerging.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/17/2008 12:32:00 PM
Karen, you have painted a marvelous portrait of life with your words. Congratulations and Good Luck in thte next round. Gpd's Lvoe and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/30/2008 7:40:00 AM
Dear Karen - Congratulations on your 2 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:36:00 AM
Karen - Very beautiful - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/13/2008 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals Karen. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2008 3:22:00 PM
What beautiful images you have created. Best wishes for the next round., Karen. lainie
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Date: 10/27/2008 5:57:00 AM
Warmest congrats Karen on making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/4/2008 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations of being featured this week. This is a very touching poem. I can see beautiful images of the flowers during springtime. This is so peaceful and relaxing to the soul. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:00:00 AM
Truly Beautiful. Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2008 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations Karen on the refeaturing of "Hidden Treasures." No man can duplicate the beauty that nature provides. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on having this gem featured again. It is so beautiful, well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/22/2008 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations Karen on this gorgeous poem being featured once again. So well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/4/2008 8:55:00 AM
lovely, lovely,lovely.thank you for your comment.i have western sky part2 somewhere in the system !
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Date: 7/17/2008 8:42:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week. very well deserved. always, GiNoLoco
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Date: 7/15/2008 5:05:00 AM
Wow. Your imagery is always breathtaking. Congratulations Karen on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:28:00 PM
Karen, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. This piece is certainly worth more than one read. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/14/2008 2:19:00 PM
Oh my, still as beautiful as the first time I read it. Congratulations on having this gem featured this week. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/14/2008 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Karen on this great write "Hidden Treasures" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/14/2008 6:21:00 AM
Karen, congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2008 11:38:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Karen.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/13/2008 4:49:00 PM
Loved the flow and word choice of your very beautiful poem - congrats on the feature
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