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Hidden Or Forgotten----A Valentine

I found it safely tucked away, Held deep within her private things She put it there, with lock and key Intended, not, for eyes to see? A cherished thing?.... Forgotten, ...when? Or was it not?...Perhaps and then.... Does it tell of secret love? Another spring, or just a whim? A treasured time, a change of fate? The date it holds, confuses me Revealing now, "what might have been?" When sleep upon her eyelids came And took her fairness far from here What held her name, with antique flair Of lilacs blooming, roses paired With lacy hearts, and cupid's spear This tells me secrets, something dear... Someone loved her, someone cared long before my Grandpa dared
__________________________________________________________________ 2/10/13

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Date: 2/14/2013 11:30:00 AM
Amazing! Perfect rhythm on this poem, alongside of some unique rhyme. You also used questions to a great advantage. One of the best poems I have read on the soup.
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Date: 2/13/2013 3:12:00 PM
Tugging at my heart is this one, Carrie! Beautiful images created this gem, for sure...Always a joy to read. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:00:00 AM
This is my firstpoem of the day. But it has surely stole my heart away. It's construction, poeticly made. Words crafted by muses to create a masterpiece. This piece touched me thus. The Situation.
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:08:00 AM
Carrie congrats are in order I now see. I knew this was a winner after I read it first.
Date: 2/11/2013 9:15:00 PM
Carrie:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 6:21:00 PM
Very intriguing and we will probably never know the details. Copngratulatiohs. A great poem as always. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/11/2013 3:22:00 PM
Oh a surprise ending so cool! We older woman have lots of secrets ;) Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:09:00 AM
Your not that old yet
Date: 2/11/2013 12:47:00 PM
Loved this...the hidden away valentine...ahhh !! Now I know who wrote this gem. Thank you for this write and for entering my contest. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:03:00 AM
such is nostalgia, and with sincere poetry like this Carrie, the past will always be remembered..
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:10:00 AM
This is amazingly romantic and beautiful my dear friend Carrie! You're indeed a very talented poet. I love and extremely enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck always. Advance happy happy valentines too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/11/2013 3:36:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic poem telling a story that has remained, perhaps, untold!...now was the time!
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