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Her Soft Canal

The powder of white sand holds her flesh close to his musk pelvis as she gasps with the murmured waves trembling on the coast of a fragrant mouth against a manly tongue, and they lay on hidden grass in an old Ipanema cove where rippling strokes fondle the east and north of her sylph-like curves: amidst the liquid Brazilian dusk, her flowing hair sinks from the lapping of crest in rhythmic grinds; tanned fingers exploring a soft canal of a nymph's heightened pleasure… by the sea- bend, he pulls her creamy thighs like a driftwood sailing afloat upon each quivered abandon while they melt under balmy trees… without the need to speak. ........................... 100 in a ROW contest -- 11

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Date: 1/5/2017 10:35:00 AM
Now that was awesomely sensual. Great job Nette.
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Date: 8/19/2016 9:34:00 AM
Passionate...:D Congrats on your win. Sunita
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:31:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:29:00 PM
Wow, that was hot. Are we talking humans here? I was thinking of seals or sea lions. Interesting phrase, "musk pelvis." ;-0
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Date: 7/18/2015 6:18:00 PM
A very sensual write dear Nette! Congrats
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Date: 7/16/2015 8:52:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your win with this super sensual write! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/15/2015 9:16:00 AM
You have a way with words Nette. Congratulations on this tasteful erotic masterpiece
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:43:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:22:00 PM
Beautifully done congrats !
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:58:00 PM
A passionate piece, so elegantly expressed. I loved that last line, especially... Congrats on the win, Nette!
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Date: 1/31/2015 10:26:00 PM
beautiful. making love between the tall white dunes. the exhaling sighs and plangent lave of sensuous tide rolling in and then out from the shore.
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:03:00 AM
You are amazing with your pen.Love this!Wish you a very very Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:40:00 AM
Well,Shakespeare described England somewhere...as a sensual woman, describing different regions of his country. Certainly,the women know better the wonders .
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:34:00 PM
Flight now booked, off to explore the Soft Canals of Ipanema. Stunning sensual images abound, amid the hidden grass, loving sounds. Got to be a winner in the contest with dreamy poetry, James :)x
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:46:00 AM
Nice and loved the line bears the essence "without the need to speak". I feel 7, Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 11/24/2014 6:38:00 AM
witwiw sadyang napakainit na mga salita haplos sa tilamsik ng sifhi ng romansa.. :) flaming hot Nette:)!
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Date: 11/24/2014 4:49:00 AM
When feelings are abundant in our hearts the best way to be expressed is through actions when this is impossible then comes words as a second choice. When the first is possible the second is unnecessary! Here words describe actions, doing as much justice to them as the ability of the poet in question! A superb poem dear, Nette, that cannot describe the feelings you have aroused in the reader's heart!
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:58:00 PM
This is probably the most fantactic erotic piece I've read Nette. The cold shower now beckons, Carl
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:45:00 PM
I am speechless too!!! I read this again, and again and again..... :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:38:00 PM
I am speechless Nette! Not to mention breathless after reading this tastefully charged flaming poem! Oh yes, I can see this at the top of the winner's list!
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:55:00 PM
One would think that all the whispered agonies of convergent flesh might already have been uttered and expressed over millennia passed. Not so, as you now have shown, and remarkably so.
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:24:00 PM
Really? Without the need to speak? What again? Don't we say action speaks louder?My God,save me from the prowess of Nette, this is just too hot for me to hold...truly soft canal...great is the poet that lives in you...huggs
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:57:00 PM
Very passionate nette...huggs
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:52:00 PM
A delightful piece of writing...a little gem!!
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Date: 11/23/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Romance of good quality, Nette !!! -Beautiful - Good luck in contest :) - oxox //Anne-Lise :)
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