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Her Prize

She complies with the powers of his eyes Her heart catches fire when she sees her prize Contest: Any NEW rhyming couplet - only 1 Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan 6/8/2013

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/15/2013 10:09:00 PM

Beautiful piece!- Edward

Donna Jones

Date: 6/15/2013 9:54:00 PM

Congratulations Russell.....:-)

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2013 5:36:00 PM

super poem super win. *love ~SKAT

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/13/2013 9:45:00 PM

As I said before...it's beautiful! Congratulations, Russell!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2013 7:45:00 PM

Very nice Russell, congratulations on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/13/2013 4:54:00 PM

A spark might just ignite this passionate couplet. Congratulation Russell on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2013 4:05:00 PM

way to go, Russell. Congrats to you.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/13/2013 4:03:00 PM

Hmm. and her prize might be? lol..congrats on a great write. BG

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/11/2013 12:07:00 AM

This is a very lovely couplet Russell for the contest. I'm sure the sponsor will like it. Good luck. AO

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/10/2013 5:40:00 PM

This sounds like a winner my friend.Exceptional!

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/9/2013 9:10:00 PM

I'm loving your Couplet, Russell! Stirs up emotions and smiles broaden! Best wishes for the Winners' List with this beauty! Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 6:30:00 PM

wow! now that is a surprise. Susan, will love this entry. Hope the prize was a big stuff puppy. LOL, JK.. good luck in the contest. xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2013 4:08:00 PM

ooh la la!!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/9/2013 12:23:00 PM

Russell, absolutely love it! All the best for the contest ;) Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2013 8:37:00 AM

a different mood form you, russell.. i like how you treated this with a fiery feel... spectacular write, my friend!..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/9/2013 6:28:00 AM

Fantastic! Good luck Russell!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/9/2013 5:32:00 AM

- It's just gorgeous, Russell! - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/8/2013 11:47:00 PM

Wow Russell, this one smoulders good luck ...Seren