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in all it's utter wonderment i under imaginary pretence a nocturnal creature stalking images of the one my readings have made but prosperity is her blessing and princess clothings are her dressings making her far above poor me my prayer was for conformanity but so far it was for naught constant prayers God forgot yet tis me who this misery is brought the times for her i've often sought i stare in the distance at her walk the nonchalant way she waves her hands walking pretending to lead a parade and band spreading a happiness so contagious it brighten the hopes of a certian man at time's i walk near her for an innocent parle praying that my pulsating heart does'nt give me away Dr. Cupid recomends one dose a day the eyes that let you see the soul the lips that could never ever grow cold of the rhythem and tenderness of her voice a representation of God's annointed choice giving to man a gift of love for we all share her with eyes and ears back to the parle "How are you today?" "Fine." "It's a beautiful day." "This dreary rainy day?" "Yeah, I love rainy weather." truth is there was no weather as far as i was concerned my only concern "is Sandra there?" "was Alexandra going to be there?" i've been lot's of places thinking she'd be there saddened to find out she was not in all it's utter wonderment and my imaginary pretence a peasant loving a princess at best eyes and imagination secretly blessed

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Date: 5/19/2009 1:34:00 AM
Beautiful write Loving! Jeremiah
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:37:00 PM
Magnificent write that you poured to the page!
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:25:00 PM
John, this is a very poigant write, excellent form, imagery and flow. The reader can truly feel the melancholy of the soul pouring from within each line. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "Centered" :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:14:00 PM
this is truly wonderful...I really enjoyed it!...sweet write...thnx for ur comment...love n smiles Maryam*
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Date: 4/9/2009 10:31:00 AM
Wonderful write truly, the love speaks loudly, it yells practically, this woman must mean alot to you. good luck. again nice job. <33 Jese =)
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Date: 4/8/2009 1:09:00 PM
"spreading a happiness so contagious it brighten the hopes of a certian man" This line alone absolutely is breath taking for it brings about a strong wind that is soul shaking.
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:13:00 PM
I loved this, you make me feel like part of your story. I can picture everything so perfectly, thank you for showing us a piece of you....Aleera
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:08:00 PM
Excellent. Thank you for this poem and the rhyme included in your last comment to me. Thank you for taking the time to truly see
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Date: 4/5/2009 1:25:00 PM
Very pretty. All the best.
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Date: 4/4/2009 3:33:00 PM
A beautiful write John. Been off the site to long must get back to reading some of your great poems. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/3/2009 5:14:00 PM
A Beautiful write with wonderful imagery. I like the fourth stanza...ok, I like the whole write...Smile!!
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Date: 4/2/2009 5:39:00 PM
Ooohhhh....I love it! Great ending line!!! Very imaginative and riviting! It draws the reader in right away and keeps a lot of relatablility on the peasant man who loves the princess....A fabulous flow and rhythm to it. Just a fabulous poem John! Great job here...Just Perfect. God bless ya friend of mine, Thanks for commenting on my poems...that was very kind of you to do and the words written touched my heart....thank you! Always your friend at the soupie...jane :)
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:33:00 PM
this is very nice! thnx for the comments ~Breana~
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:34:00 PM
Nice ekphrasis, that dot on the left is not a star, it allows me to draw in the center, without it, I can't align anything up. Thanks for your comments...Raul
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:28:00 PM
This is beautiful and so very heartfelt, I loved this John. Wonderful write. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 4/2/2009 8:40:00 AM
how lovey, what a painting in words you have made, she is a reality. wonderful writting.
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Date: 4/2/2009 7:03:00 AM
secret dreams of a loving heart.....very well written.....I am learning so much from you all.
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:40:00 PM
So very beatuful and tender. Very heartfelt, dear John. Lainie
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Date: 4/1/2009 11:07:00 AM
wonderful write John "a nocturnal creature stalking images" very nice! also liked the break to rhyme to carry from one stanza to the next, voice to choice. PS as to Beached, you bright man guessed to well the horrid ending I didn't tell :( but ne'er a wee one thank goodness just major embaressment..I can now laugh at!
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful Imagery! Expressive and heartfelt! Very nice. ~Trudy~
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Date: 3/30/2009 1:50:00 PM
This poem is way too long. Is a turn off.
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:02:00 PM
hi my friend John, such an eloquently written poem, hope this finds you well take care D-nyce
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Date: 3/29/2009 10:53:00 AM
Awesome write you've done here, John and thanks so much for your "Doorkeeper" comment. I really appreciate your enthusiasm ... smile ... hope we can hang on to this site!!
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Date: 3/29/2009 3:17:00 AM
an excellent romantic write... you have made Alexandra blush! :) ~ Arany
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Date: 3/28/2009 2:39:00 PM
Dear John: Such a romantic poem. Quite beautifully written. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so glad you liked it. Janice Herzog xoxo
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