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Her Opal

The opal of her body, so sensuous Creates disruption within my very soul Without resting, she moves me so sumptuous I falter in breathing because her control She brings be beyond error and ignorance However I crumble due to her brilliance Her eyes tenderly take me beyond their cast I start to soften as passion holds me fast
Contest: Meltdown Sponsor: Anthony Slausen 6/17/2013

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  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Opal is my birthstone . I know this well with my X,, together for 17 years ;}

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:06:00 PM
    ahhh.......this kind of meltdown is one to make us breathless, and willing!! Great work, Russell!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 6:02:00 AM
    - Russell, this is just gorgeous! - (Who is she (?)) - Luck in contest !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 5:40:00 PM
    This is a hymn to the perfect woman! Lucky you are my friend to be inspired by such a vision! Fantastic poem! Good luck, although you do not need!

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 3:16:00 PM
    A sensuous and passionate poem you have written. An excellent entry Russell for Anthony's contest.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Very passionate poem here Russell!Enjoyed a lot.Thanks for visiting my poem page.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Passionate work..I am sure that Anthony will enjoy this one in his contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I have finished "Spilled Coffee" if you care to read the finished work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:16:00 AM
    well, you definitely made me melt with this passionate endeavor, russell... you set the mood up for a wonderful clincher in the final line!... marvelous, simmering job!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 7:21:00 AM
    A beautiful meltdown Russell You must feel like a Hershey Chocolate Left out in the sun too long, poor fellow And I love the title you gave it, it's fitting talk soon xxx

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 5:48:00 AM
    This is aflame with desire....Awesome write!!!! Thanks for your continual encouragment, Russell.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:37:00 AM
    what a lovely way to describe someone. an Opal!! That is so pretty, Russell. And I loved the contrast of softening with passion!