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Her fourth and last season

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Her fourth and last season

her spring sun was shining always too bright
summer seasoned her sadness 
autumn breezes  her death

a sad unhappy your girl's winged words found
"my voices and I agree"
cold winter's end freed her

©Elly Wouterse

Entry for The Poet III Contest 
Sponsor - 	gautami phookan

Note:

1. 
based on a true story - I read about it in the newspaper - again ............
another Dutch teen choose her final flight after her endless search  for love and that final fight

2.
I quote from a note the parents of the girl found in her room after she took her own life..
".... my voices and I agree...."


How "heroic or grand in scale and character" was and is  this girl until reaching her point of no return................. 



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  1. Date: 10/1/2014 1:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Elly

  1. Date: 10/1/2014 9:47:00 AM
    Visiting again to congratulate you, Elly

  1. Date: 10/1/2014 8:55:00 AM
    heartbreaking write Elly - these tragic deaths are happening all too often:-( many congrats on your win hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 10/1/2014 8:35:00 AM
    A stunning poem, Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:01:00 PM
    Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Elly

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 2/1/2014 5:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    TY!!! Dutch Greetings Elly
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 4:28:00 PM
    Elly! Congrats on your nice poem and great win! 7 G.

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 2/1/2014 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    G. TY - pleased THIS poem and its message is will be noticed more - it's important. Dutch Greetings Elly