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Heavenly Journey

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind As I close my eyes and drift off to dream I see my body lying on the bed And I hover near the ceiling Floating like magic Through the window a light shines So bright and glowing it draws me closer I’m weightless and drifting toward the heavens Looking down to the world below Chaos and stress leave me I am free, soaring like a bird in the night Clouds fade in the distance And the light shines more intensely The nearer I get; the warmer its glow A rainbow of colors dances around me Swirling in and out of my spirit Allowing me to mingle vibrantly I recognize many faces Like clouds of color Their energy embraces me Inviting me; welcoming me in Below the earth resembles a portrait Painted with the hand of God Shimmering in brilliant color Bold and full of life I awake still filled with light Feeling the fire within my soul Longing to once again visit this joyful place Knowing that one day I will *For the "Magical Journey" contest

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Date: 11/25/2009 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Lena on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:40:00 PM
congrats in the contest!! good job!!
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your truly magical journey and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:12:00 PM
Congrats, Lolita, on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. well deserved win for an excellent write... happy to be sharing the same stage with u.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:44:00 AM
You gave me a wow. I give you a wow x2. Very nice. I felt as if I was there soaring. I guess I'm in a soaring mood today.
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:38:00 AM
great fantasy, good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:04:00 PM
Good luck in the contest and may this dream come true. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/11/2009 5:17:00 PM
beautiful, good job
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:45:00 PM
Lena, What a beautiful write. I read it twice. Truly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing and for your most welcome comments I appreciate it! Good luck in contest! Take care Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:02:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/10/2009 11:48:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Michael's contest Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:44:00 PM
beautiful write! Lena! ....ignore the troll!... and thanks for your warm comments! jimbo
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:31:00 PM
You write to paint a wonderful picture of a heavenly journey Lena. Good luck. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/10/2009 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful write. Wonderful imagery. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/10/2009 9:51:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 11/10/2009 7:50:00 AM
Lovely and dreamy magical journey. It gives hope and serenity! Good luck in the contest, Lena! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/10/2009 5:04:00 AM
Oh Lolita this is a magnificent entry for Constance's contest.. I also have entered.. luv competitions... such an excellent poem ... much imagery ... I felt as if I were floating with u... and its a truthful poem as well.. very inspirational spin within it to share... such a dear u are for answering my blog today.. Constance also said she was having much trouble too.. I soup mailed management but no answer as yet.. thankxxx for loving comments on my poetry ... appreciative.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 11/10/2009 1:51:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Your words here are very soothing and you have taken us on this journey of us. Thank you!
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:46:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Lena .Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today.
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