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Heaven Or Hell

Made my choice I always wear the blessed Bennedict cross scared of the Devil himself for my soul protection I saw the faces twisted in agony mouths open screaming arms out pleading with love to be saved inside a moving mass of pain in Hell I walked in the burning darkness suffering pains a zombie for my sins a blind existence inside one shell I had no one other than family to call upon as friends Seeing suffering tortured souls what they done to me Trusted to easily used and stole from in my charity Born under the wolf moon always watching in the shadows a mountain climber by birthright Howling into a cold loneliness one fight with the heavens inside at war Brought to my knees in the all forgiving face of God cured of cancer one miracle I know destiny again coming out from arising sun I bow humble and meek I will be stronger for living knowing where to place my trust Smiling always with friends because I see now love It is you who makes each and every single world go around I walk now towards your light forgiving my past Ready to face this big bad world again only now I am stronger seeing hope always praying for you love No redemption in Hell it just keeps getting worse

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Date: 10/15/2014 8:06:00 PM
I am honored to find this gem to save to my favorites list here my friend. You wrote so very true with this and such truth needs to be told to others! Bravooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/15/2014 8:29:00 PM
robert been down a few dark paths makes for strength and power in love i remember a great leader once said he wanted to be king of all kings he would erase milan from ever existing he was warned not to cross the water but greed was his destiny puts man to shame
Date: 9/27/2014 9:18:00 AM
Wow, what a ride you took my on with this piece. I think there are some intricacies here you are more privy too, as I followed I trusted God's Grace was sufficient. Good effort liam. one verse this reminds me of "Do not love the world or anything in the world. If anyone loves the world, the love of the Father is not in him." (1 John 2:15) verse 16 is not bad either.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 9:29:00 AM
truly blew me away thomas wonderful comment loving the world is greed of possessions heartfelt appreciated thank you for your kindness
Date: 9/15/2014 6:02:00 AM
If We don't taste hell ,We'll never know what heaven feels like.I am glad you can taste a bit of heaven after the pain.Your voice in the poem speaks trutfully and profound.
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Date: 9/15/2014 4:52:00 AM
I see my friend, Liam! When we place our trust in the right hands then there is nothing to be afraid of. Things will go fine no matter what the difficulties we face. A very thought provoking, beautiful and complex poem!
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