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Heaven Help Me

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Heaven Help Me

Please move it on sir...
You are holding up the line
Re-innn...carnate what?
Could you repeat that? Oh, yeah!
See that "Been-There-Done-That" sign?

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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:43:00 AM
    uniquely imparted, tim.. congrats to the max!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:27:00 AM
    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:24:00 PM
    funny tanka, Congrats Lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 8:09:00 AM
    Congrats on your win with this funny tanka Tim!Enjoyed the read

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:14:00 AM
    good funny write...Congrats on your great win with this beautiful Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:28:00 AM
    Glad this funny one got on the list. Congrats, Tim.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:37:00 PM
    Hey Tim, this is lovely. I love the touch of humour. Nice! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:15:00 PM
    Beautiful Tim, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 4:24:00 PM
    I'm giggling, Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Tim. Su

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:47:00 PM
    A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 9:59:00 PM
    haha, Good one, tim.