Get Your Premium Membership
Member Area
Soup Social
Member Poems
Member Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Poetry Resources
Home » Poems » Vijay Pandit » Hearts Croon

Hearts Croon

Hearts croon in blush of moon Desires soon sing that tune Dreamy night swirls with stars Beaming sight, searching Mars Happy sigh thrills your eyes Passions high, reach for prize Cuddling stance dwells in bliss Fervent glance ends in kiss July 3, 2020 Placed 1st: Verses in Essence – 8 Lines Poetry Contest Six syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com) Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

George Avatar
Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 4:57:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
You can boil down passion to the desired size without losing its fervency and warmth ! A very sweet write Vijay!
Login to Reply
Crabtree Avatar
Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/16/2020 1:56:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
A beautiful write, Vijay. You are truly gifted in your writing. Another favorite for me :) ~Angie
Login to Reply
Mishra Avatar
Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/16/2020 9:39:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I wish to learn the art of blending gorgeous imagery and references with soothing emotions like you do my friend. This is another one of your brilliant verses. Congratulations on your win Vijay. Keep writing and inspiring :)
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 7/12/2020 7:53:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Vijay, a gorgeous winning write combining two of my favorite themes; celestial beauty and romance. Nicely crafted, congratulations on your win, my friend ~ John
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 2:42:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Created with your innate ease, Vijay, my compliments for your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@William
Login to Reply
May Avatar
Joseph May
Date: 7/11/2020 2:29:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
The moon blushes with romance, Congrats on your win Vijay
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/11/2020 2:02:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Love your poem here. Congrats on the win, Vijay.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 1:41:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Another GREAT poem--a WINNER, Vijay! Janice
Login to Reply
Goldsmith Avatar
Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/11/2020 12:07:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Congratulation on your win. I love the last two lines. Enjoy your win and day writing away..................
Login to Reply
Nicole Avatar
Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/8/2020 4:58:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
"Dreamy night swirls with stars" Makes my heart flutter. Simply love that thought. This is so beautiful and romantic my dear friend. Sweet and dreamy, with a hint of passion. :) Brandy
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2020 6:19:00 AM
block poet
Much appreciate my friend your lovely comments--many thanks.
One Avatar
Silent One
Date: 7/4/2020 10:03:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
you did really well here with the syllable count... a lovely romantic poem..
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 2:58:00 PM
block poet
Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
Joanna Daniel
Date: 7/3/2020 11:59:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Wow! cute essence of romance, Vijay:)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:30:00 AM
block poet
Thank you, Jo--much appreciate.
Ball Avatar
Judy Ball
Date: 7/3/2020 4:09:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Nicely done Vijay. Great rhythm and rhyme. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:30:00 AM
block poet
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Judy--many thanks.
Deepa Avatar
V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 2:00:00 PM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Graceful lines sir:-) Enjoyed your poem.Good luck for the contest. Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:29:00 AM
block poet
Thank you Deepa--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
Mike Gentile
Date: 7/3/2020 11:44:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
I love the rhyming Vijay! A great entry for this contest. I'm sure that you will do well !!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:29:00 AM
block poet
Thank you Mike--much appreciate the kind remarks.
Andresen Avatar
Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/3/2020 9:01:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
- A wonderful poem, Vijay ... love the last two lines - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:28:00 AM
block poet
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/3/2020 8:13:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Very nice lines, Vijay. I'm working on one about cuddling and cooing, but it's not in the notion of adult romance.
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:28:00 AM
block poet
Looking forward to seeing your poem--much appreciate, Jenna--many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/3/2020 7:36:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Well composed Vijay, I didn't find this one easy. Good luck Tom
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:27:00 AM
block poet
True--much appreciate Tom--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/3/2020 7:10:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
SO lovely, Vijay. To me, this prompt was a real challenge, You've made it look easy. Janice
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:26:00 AM
block poet
Much appreciate, Janice--many thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/3/2020 7:02:00 AM
Block poet from commenting on your poetry
Joyous, romantic, inspiring and uplifting. Wonderful melodic croon my friend, Vijay. Enjoyed! Good luck!
Login to Reply
Pandit Avatar
Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/4/2020 9:26:00 AM
block poet
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Book: Shattered Sighs