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He Thought Himself Cute

There was a man who thought himself as cute* Believed that women saw him as ripe fruit At the mirror always looked With himself was surly hooked Feared his charms were about from him to loot! (C) Demetrios Trifiatis 24 July 2015 * I have noticed that a lot of poets, these days, are writing Limericks so, not to be... outdone, I thought to try once!

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/26/2015 4:26:00 PM

Welcome to the club my dear Demetrios! This was fun... more please! Cheers, Jack

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/28/2015 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Mr. President. It is an honor!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/25/2015 2:52:00 AM

A wonderful write here.......A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/28/2015 2:06:00 PM

A.M. thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/24/2015 5:42:00 PM

You penned this extremely great also you are a great, your write is cute and sweet.........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/28/2015 2:10:00 PM

Thank you for your dear comment my friend, A.M.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/24/2015 4:42:00 PM

Excellent limerick my friend. Have a great weekend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 5:40:00 PM

You too have a nice weekend my friend, Tim. Thank you for visiting!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/24/2015 12:27:00 PM

:) So, you are trying the funny side of things, my dear poet. :) Who is the cute man, may we know? Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 1:07:00 PM

For once, just for once because humor is part of life, isn't it? There are a lot of cute men in the world, no one in particular. I think I might delete it! Thank you for visiting though, dear Eileen!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2015 7:49:00 AM

Glad to see you jump on the limerick express Demetrios:- I love writing limericks Demetrios in fact I have just posted a string of 3 lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 8:26:00 AM

Well, I thought to try. I visited yours, they are hilarious. Thank you, Jan!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/24/2015 7:25:00 AM

That's funny! Not bad for a first try, sire. Now, maybe you can post some more every now and then. Limerick is fun, a real challenge to flex the brain muscles while delivering the punch! Good morning!. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/24/2015 8:25:00 AM

From time to time, maybe, dear Kim. Thank you for your approval.