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He Sings Behind Prison Bars Blues

He sings "behind prison bars" blues 'cause he's walked in another man's shoes! He feels so bereft since identity theft only works until one pays his dues. (not for the contest; it's too short)

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/10/2015 2:44:00 PM

Another fine limerick Andrea, you really like writing those.

Robin Davis

Date: 6/2/2014 9:20:00 AM

Andrea This is such a cute and fun write. A lesson taught not to be a crook in a silly and humorous way. Thank you for the great comment on my Yesterday Vs Today poem. LOL Yes, I have the same problem with your poems, remembering what was done or not. Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/19/2012 9:23:00 AM

Oh this is good, so good...

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/12/2012 7:05:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts penned beautifully. Sorry, enjoyed lately. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always, bl

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2011 2:52:00 PM

LOL, thought I'd enjoy one of your oldies again before I log off for the night. I remember this one and still got a chuckle

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/10/2011 5:46:00 PM

serves him right LOL...Light & Love

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/9/2011 3:30:00 PM

Contest, shmontest. It's nice to just write. especially when they're this good. Excelant!!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/9/2011 8:59:00 AM

ALL of these people should be behind bars. Go and find a life of their own never mind stealing someones. Wonder how Carolyn made out. She had this happen to her. love phyl

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/8/2011 12:50:00 PM

But a good one.Yes Andrea I wore the jeans rolled up under my dress cause after ceremony went horse back rideing.Thanks for all your kind comments and lovely congrats you send.I'm only able to write one comment for the several you send cause i only have one finger to type with but read them all.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/8/2011 6:19:00 AM

I agree with james,lovely poem,i just wish i had mre time to read mre dear..tryin to go read 2 other frnds 2

James Fraser

Date: 6/7/2011 3:24:00 PM

Fine Limerick Andrea, it's a shame there was not a shorter contest. You would be onto a winner here :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/6/2011 11:30:00 AM

LOL, what a pity it's too short for the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/6/2011 10:15:00 AM

As a recent victim of identity theft, I'm glad he's paying his dues. Great limerick for the contest, Andrea! Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 6/6/2011 9:33:00 AM

loved this poem, no matter how many lines you had, a great piece as is, but if the contest calls for 20 lines, i hope you can do something with it, but i love it as it is. thank you for for commenting on Crying Door Knob.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/6/2011 7:41:00 AM

Nice Limerick here Andrea.But as per the contest rule entry should at least 20 lines long.Please check:)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/6/2011 6:26:00 AM

Hey, good start, Andrea. You're a quarter of the way there. Come on, girl!!! With your skill you can slap on the rest in no time. Good going here. :-)

Don Johnson

Date: 6/5/2011 9:49:00 PM

No good worrying till the crows build a nest in your overcoat hehe.. looks good to me, comments lovely c, xo Don

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 9:29:00 PM

nicely done, heartie... a double limerick, maybe?? go and win! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/5/2011 6:28:00 PM

Will be waiting for more limericks to continue, Andrea

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/5/2011 5:56:00 PM

Andrea, even when you screw up or fall short, you are still worth a look and worth reading. Now I, myself, would define that as a true winning poet, which you are. Regards and thank you for all your kind words. They do mean a lot. Regards, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/5/2011 4:51:00 PM

cool one to start it off Andrea.. so now add to these great lines so interesting and a great premise and it will read winning the behind the bar blues luv.. good luck..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2011 4:01:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work this eve..Sorry that this one didn't meet the requirements for the contest...It reads like a winning entry..Thanks for stopping by my work about mirage..No this one has been in the making for several weeks and not for a contest..Sara

Judy Konos

Date: 6/5/2011 2:57:00 PM

sounds like a wrap to me.......and a very good one....thanks

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/5/2011 1:51:00 PM

Still made me smile as always... great entry...luv Michael