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Shadows of the pre-dawn night Of thee I fathom what's to come Fear not the shades of hopeless strife Thy will preludes the strength of sun O'er prairies filled with downy haze Your power seeks to forge a path That follows rainbows all the way From lightning strikes to calm at last Of thee I fathom what's to come 'Till sundown, battles will be won! 12/21/13 7:30 am

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Date: 1/27/2014 1:40:00 PM
Absolutely loved this piece, Jimbo. Excellent rhymes that made me want to read it over and over again, which is always a sign of a great poem in my book :)
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:09:00 PM
I love the message in you poem James, something to look forward towhen all the battles are over, nice write, blessings Carl
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Date: 12/24/2013 9:44:00 AM
Ahh!! This one is great ...It has such good flow and rhythm to it..It just pulls the reader in to enjoy..Thanks for the drop by and Christmas greeting..I will remember to tell Doris that you said hello..May this be the best Christmas up to this point in your life and may each that follows only get better..Sara
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Date: 12/24/2013 4:17:00 AM
James--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/23/2013 4:32:00 PM
Battles will be won ..cause God will not leave us alone.Hope your mama is better dear friend.Have a blessed Christmas and tnks for supporting my poetry for so long.
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Date: 12/21/2013 9:24:00 AM
I like how it ends on a great positive note. The title is eye catching!!
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