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Halloween Spooks - I

HALLOWEEN SPOOKS - I Not by night Not by day No escape No way In your bed Late at night There’s no help There’s no light On the highway For heaven’s sakes! Brace yourself No brakes In the air Take a breath Oh my God – Smell of death! In the bathroom On the stool Evil, smiling, Disgusting ghoul Climbing the stairs Bedroom above Oops! Whoops! I get a shove Love in the night Better not look Fatal kiss She’s a spook!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2012 1:00:00 PM
Like this! LOL
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Date: 10/24/2012 2:36:00 PM
a kids worst nightmare! spooky one!
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:08:00 AM
A Hallowen goodie, Daver! Better sleep with your lights on! "spook...ghoul" makes me think of sinister pumpkin faces. A fun write!:) I'm going to check out your other Halloween Spook! Love you, Mikki
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:37:00 AM
Shivers! Can I handle part two? We will see...........
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:06:00 PM
awesome wandering around spooksville, it reminds me of how i felt, as a young lad when i had to walk home in the dark through the local graveyard...enjoyed the poem....
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:06:00 PM
awesome wandering around spooksville, it reminds me of how i felt, as a young lad when i had to walk home in the dark through the local graveyard...enjoyed the poem....
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Date: 10/4/2012 6:46:00 AM
sounds like a rough day....LOL funny one my friend. take care.
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:49:00 PM
creepy
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Date: 10/3/2012 4:32:00 PM
Hey Daver I'm getting a bit worried about you.." My advice...Try dating in a different neighborhood L O L yours Joe..k
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Date: 10/3/2012 3:09:00 PM
HAS ME CHUCKLING ON THIS GEM OF A WRITE love phyl
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Date: 10/3/2012 3:05:00 PM
hahaha, this one is full of spooky spooks!!! I really enjoyed the little tales inside this one, DAver. Wish I could see more from you. Always in a rush. I hate that!!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:08:00 PM
Be careful, your significant other might not like being called a spook, ha ha! Seriously though, this write is a true specimen for the Halloween spirit, I love it! You've done marvelously, I love this season and your poem excites me about it! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:24:00 PM
Wow....what a spooky write!Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:20:00 PM
So clever, I just love it..Oops! Whoops! ! Perfect for the season. BG!
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