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Half Of A Heart

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Half Of A Heart

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                                                    please
                                            fill                      please
                                       in                              you
                                    my                              would
                                 heart
                                  by
                                 cupping
                                  your
                                  right
                                    hand
                                      over
                                        the
                                          right
                                             side
                                                 of
                                                   the
                                                       poem
                                                          and
                                                              pray
                                                                  for 
                                                                       healing

Half of my heart is not well
Please cup your hand to complete it..

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  1. Date: 11/30/2014 8:04:00 AM
    Big thumb's up on this poem Sara. I looked at your list of poems and your repertoire is impressive. I have yet to try a shape poem. My imagination is more story type stuff. This is a gift straight from the heart, and it reached mine. Congrats. Thomas

  1. Date: 10/21/2014 6:16:00 PM
    Love this! So different.

  1. Date: 9/6/2014 1:41:00 PM
    I just noticed this was considered your best poem at Soup. It really is one of your very best. by the way, I am looking high and low and cannot find how you got that page of my fall poem with the picture behind it. Could you either copy and paste the link from your browser and email it to me, or tell me where to find it here at Soup? Thanks, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/29/2014 10:57:00 AM
    Hand cupped! We all have those times our hearts aren't well as mine is sore aswell

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 9:24:00 PM
    Great "concrete" poem here! Peace &Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/4/2014 2:32:00 PM
    Hi Sara, This was outstanding and very tender... Thoughtful and sweet Sara. Thank you very much for sharing this beauty with us and congrats for having it featured. Never to late for a congrats:~) Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Hi Sara, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Hi Sara, I found this on the "Featured Poem of the Week" page. Congratulations. I love the creativity and blessings to you :)

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Sara....this is so ingenious! I cupped my hand and prayed for healing. Hugs

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:47:00 PM
    A lovely poem, and an awesome idea.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Half of my heart is in need also. Just had a defibrillator installed. Wishing you the best of health. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Wow! Very unique and beautiful poem, Sara! I really enjoyed this one! Very well done! And, thank you once again for the nice comments on my poem "Scarred Heart". I appreciate it! Hugs to you, Kelly

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 5:25:00 PM
    This is so so beautiful. Your way with words awes me. I look up to you. Thanks for the inspirational message. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Sara; this is wonderful and so unique. I will fill your heart and pray for healing. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 10:21:00 AM
    oh my, i share my heart with you, sara and bless your day with healing and peace... love the shape and lyrics..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:18:00 PM
    want your full well Sara K the spell ole johnson thoughts are feeling

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 6:49:00 PM
    Sara....I know.....and you know my situation...saw 3 Peregrin Falcons perched on light poles today! Their recovery here is a miracle! Thriving in an urban environment (lots of pigeons!) every day is truly a gift...this poem....wow! from the extreme possibilties of creativity! To mine faves! Will print and post on my "best poems" board.....jimbo

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 5:19:00 PM
    such a clever idea - I cupped my hand :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Unique way of writing a poem, I loved it...peter

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:52:00 PM
    sara, this is outstandingly creative. I love it and I cupped the heart for you!

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