Haiku 51

in pale moonlight on fresh fallen snow footprints appear 11/24/14

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2015 11:21:00 PM

another haiku I had missed out on. Who would the footsteps belong to?

Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2015 2:19:00 AM

Lovely Haiku.Wish you a very very Happy New Year Phyllis.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/13/2014 3:59:00 PM

enjoying this beauty again - love it

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2014 11:53:00 AM

- It's so beautiful with fresh new snow .... small footprints in the snow, maybe a cat - Wonderful haiku, dear Phyllis :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2014 3:38:00 PM

oh, love this beauty, Phyll. Hope you are well, my friend, and that the weather there isn't too bad. Have a great week x

Michael Newman

Date: 11/25/2014 6:42:00 AM

Excellent word choice. emphasis on a season word works well. Miken

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2014 4:27:00 PM

wonderful imagery Phyllis:-) Hugs jan xxx

David Meade

Date: 11/24/2014 2:30:00 PM

Ah, yes . . . very nice -- I can visualize the scene, the soft light, silence of snow and mysterious footprint . . . at least in my imagination . . . nicely done.