Haiku 48

damp footprints over dead leaves fall's farewell

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Nurudeen Olaniran

Date: 10/29/2014 6:22:00 AM

somebody was at home when i was not around. Spirit!. good one Phylis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2014 6:50:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku..I bet that some of those stuck onto the shoe and got deposited in the house..Imagination gone wild that's me..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2014 7:55:00 PM

Phyllis, thanks so much for reading so MANY of my poems today and for all the sweet things you said. You are such a dear. I really like how you describe fall in this little haiku. Let me go among your oldies and reread one of them at least!!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/22/2014 10:16:00 PM

A sad goodbye to a very wonderful season and a warmth welcome to another wonderful one my dear friend, Phyllis. Thank you so much for the vicarious experience you lovingly shared through your awesome haiku. Sending you many hugs! Hope you're doin well my very dear friend. love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2014 12:02:00 PM

- Every night gets colder .... beautiful haiku, dear Phyllis! - (Do not get chilled, my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

Date: 10/21/2014 9:40:00 PM

I liked the imagery -- I have walked these woods, seen the wet leaves, and the boot prints . . . the sweet damp air, and cold wind blowing. Loved it.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/21/2014 9:35:00 PM

Very beautiful.Thank you.