Haiku 42

hot summer evening along the gravel road deer graze 7/7/14

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Nurudeen Olaniran

Date: 8/16/2014 12:29:00 PM

Good and real. Haiku. love Nurudeen

Gene Bourne

Date: 7/18/2014 6:08:00 AM

Something is causing the deer to enter our town, running across suburban streets Very enjoyable Haiku, Phyl.....Yf...Gene.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2014 5:08:00 AM

A lovely summer haiku Phyllis. I love to watch deer. The deer at the grand canyon are so tame they practically let you pet them. I was amazed to see them wandering the parking lot with no fear of humans.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2014 3:21:00 PM

- Phyllis , this haiku is so lovely !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 7/13/2014 2:41:00 PM

Lovely Haiku,Phyllis, Thank you for dropping by to read part 3/or 3 of "Out of the Darkness'. Actually that is the last part. In order to make sense of the first chapter of the novel I am currently writing, you need to read part 1 of 3, then 2 of 3 and then 3/3. I know it isn't poetry, but I wanted to get ffed back on my novel. bfn Elaine

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/10/2014 10:33:00 AM

I am actually just learning haiku, but love what I've tried so far. Thank you for your poetry!! God bless you.