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Haiku 41

snow melts on wet pavement cars stuck in slush 3/18/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/14/2014 10:50:00 PM
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oh my that's my car stuck 4sure... enjoyed.. PD
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Len Gasun
Date: 4/3/2014 10:07:00 AM
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A lovely heartfelt haiku my dear friend Phylis! Thank u so much for sharing. I love love it so much. Giving u hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Matthew Anish
Date: 4/2/2014 10:25:00 PM
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Makes me glad I gave up driving! Spring is on the way so the troubles you express in this fine ,short poem will soon be a thing of the past. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Gene Bourne
Date: 3/30/2014 10:57:00 PM
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A lyrical, hearfelt composition. Then comes the fifth season we will face. Thanks for this, Your PS friend Gene Bourne.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/29/2014 10:57:00 PM
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I like your haiku. I bet you are seeing a lot of that kind of thing this year!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/29/2014 10:57:00 PM
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It was so nice of you to spend so much time perusing many of the poems of mine you did not see lately. Thanks , dear, and I'm sorry you were so sick. ARe you feeling better now? So far this has not been such a bad year. I have my fingers crossed for us BOTH.
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/29/2014 8:45:00 PM
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Nice descriptions Phyllis..:-) :-) :-) :-) so glad the snow is melting though...things are budding..here!!! Yeah....:-) :-)
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/29/2014 5:22:00 PM
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contrasts well with the first beautiful fall of snow. // paul
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Skat A
Date: 3/20/2014 2:14:00 PM
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so deep, and messy love the haiku ~SKAT~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/19/2014 12:40:00 PM
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- Is it spring that comes ....... call for a strong man ..... nice haiku, Phyllis! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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