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Haiku 3

mist of pink and white petals flutter on the breeze... silence as they land © 16/04/2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/1/2013 12:33:00 PM

Very sweet soft imagination penned nicely. Loved always, bl

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/26/2013 8:47:00 PM

Beeeaautiful haiku. Very atmospheric.

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 2:02:00 PM

Mandy a lovely last line...congratulations...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:53:00 PM

Mandy, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/22/2013 11:40:00 AM

Lovely and beautiful piece,Mandy..Congrats my friend on your well deserved win in this contest..XOXO...

David De La Croes

Date: 4/22/2013 1:10:00 AM

Great atmosphere in this poem - congratulations, Mandy!

Ray Dillard

Date: 4/21/2013 10:29:00 PM

What a peaceful and tender write! Congratulations, RAY

Jack Horne

Date: 4/21/2013 3:58:00 PM

love this - congrats on your wins

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 4/21/2013 1:34:00 PM

Mandy beautifully written. Congratulations. Warm Smiles, Connie

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/21/2013 11:50:00 AM

Mandy...Simple, Elegant, Beautiful. Very lovely to read your creative flow

Len Gasun

Date: 4/21/2013 8:17:00 AM

Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Mandy! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

Joseph May

Date: 4/21/2013 3:33:00 AM

congrats on your win Mandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 11:23:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Mandy.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2013 7:19:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/20/2013 4:59:00 PM

Majestic! Speaks out volumes!

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/17/2013 2:52:00 PM

i like this, the visual is amazing...

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2013 9:18:00 AM

Love that last line, Mandy........so soft, it makes it even more beautiful :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 4/17/2013 6:11:00 AM

Mandy that's lovely..Hugs...Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 4/16/2013 10:05:00 PM

Beautiful Mandy...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/16/2013 9:16:00 PM

Lovely, Mandy! Simply beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2013 5:06:00 PM

a lovely picture this one creates, my dear.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/16/2013 4:42:00 PM

i like this! nice one!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/16/2013 3:28:00 PM

If it weren't for a contest Goldie you would not need to do 5/7/5, it would flow better [pink and white petals/flutter on a scented breeze-silence] saying mist is being subjective and the reader would get that feeling without it that gives you room to introduce scent..BIG hugs..how have you been? Home from vacation? Light & love

Terry O'Leary

Date: 4/16/2013 2:36:00 PM

Beautiful, Mandy... Terry

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/16/2013 1:39:00 PM

As pleasant an image as can be....love it!