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Haiku 35

dark clouds rain dropping in bucket drum solo 11/25/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/25/2014 8:59:00 AM
I love Haiku and I love them more when I read yours. Wonderful writing Phyllis as usual. :) Carol
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Date: 1/23/2014 5:13:00 AM
Simple but resonates more than what you wrote. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 12/23/2013 5:16:00 PM
Great write well done.best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 12/4/2013 2:48:00 PM
yes, love this
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Date: 11/30/2013 12:57:00 AM
Hi, sweetie, I sure enjoyed the visual and the sound you put with the rain for this one. I am avoiding all the blogs until I catch up from being away. It was good to see some poets visited me while I was seeing my son's family for the holiday. What did you do this week? Good seeing you here tonight and I hope you had a fantastic week.
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:06:00 PM
Happy Thanks giving Phyll [shhhh cause & effect?] Light & Love
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Date: 11/28/2013 1:29:00 AM
in perfect rythem. reminds me of one of my poems. i'm sure you know the one.
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:18:00 PM
music of nature, enjoyed this one, enjoy your thanksgiving, always.... p.d.
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Date: 11/26/2013 8:12:00 AM
.... Yesterday snow ........ today is rain ...... Well done haiku, Phyllis!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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