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haiku 16

red raspberry bushes
wasps gather to eat...
her stained ruby lips

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 6:41:00 PM
    Ahhhh!!I know those lips were flavorful..Enjoyed this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your Canadian air came down to us by way of the jet stream and the hurricane..It is warmer today though..Yesterday and last night it was bad with the wind factored in but it is not as windy today..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:20:00 PM
    oh,I had seen this one. And I still find it wonderful. thanks for your several comments today, Phyllis. Sure wish I had time to seek out any oldies of yours I may never have read yet.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:08:00 PM
    wow, you did REALLY well with this one. A gorgeous haiku, my friend.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:01:00 PM
    A very fine Haiku, Phyllis. I love the form because the reader can read so many things into the lines. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 11:46:00 AM
    Well done....very tasteful. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)