Haiku 15

a gray cat sits beside the fish pond... startled frog croaks 10/18/12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 10:15:00 AM

hehehe, enjoying the view once again...Now this time i'm wondering who's gonna get startled... xox..Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 7:52:00 PM

phylis.. thanks for your nice haiku... always~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2012 11:19:00 PM

Love it, Phyllis. Let me see the other.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/18/2012 1:59:00 PM

hrrrRIBIT! I hope that kitty was frightened away. I Like this one. I wish I could frighten all the stray cats away from my bird and squirrel feeder. I fear a few squirrels have been eaten. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2012 11:44:00 AM

Cute haiku Phyllis - like it. :) - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)