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Haiku 11

a train whistles
on a misty summer night...
fog horn blows

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  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:58:00 PM
    This a a very sweet little poem! Keepit up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 7:13:00 AM
    A train trip by the ocean. Nice.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 5:05:00 PM
    Ah! Lovely! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 7:40:00 AM
    an eerie sound in a lovely setting Phyl .. nicely done luv .. hope all is well with u .. am still dealing with painful arthritis in both hands so trying to rise above it .. happy week ..

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 1:06:00 PM
    love the interplay of words and expressions, phyl... delighted!...huggs

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:19:00 PM
    Phyllis, love your haiku... trains are annoying here in Texas... good night;.;;pd

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 7:52:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing this lovely Haiku, Phyllis. Beautiful! Appreciate your visit and comments, neighbor. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Liked best No. 10 - but this was also good. You're good with haiku poems Phyllis. Have a lovely weekend. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 4:22:00 PM
    you kept it going.. nice job. I really like #10 the best though, preference I guess... :) Best regards, Cindy