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Ocean high as sky Tall ship sinking in the deep dory in its wake

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Date: 5/28/2018 8:13:00 AM
Very clever and love it so much...so nicely written.
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:43:00 AM
Beautiful haiku excellently drawn with matching picture my lovely friend. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/25/2016 10:26:00 PM
Wonderful images. Neat little gem.
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Date: 2/21/2016 12:48:00 PM
A superb HAIKU with a marvelous illustration! Excellent word use... Best wishes, Keith
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Elaine George
Date: 2/22/2016 3:04:00 AM
Thank you Keith. Elaine
Date: 2/19/2016 5:58:00 AM
Lovely Haiku, Elaine. Congrats.
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Elaine George
Date: 2/20/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thank you, Steve.
Date: 2/18/2016 7:39:00 PM
hey, congrats for the win, sweet lady!
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Elaine George
Date: 2/19/2016 2:10:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Elaine
Date: 2/17/2016 1:30:00 PM
Elaine, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Elaine
Date: 2/17/2016 7:32:00 AM
Elaine, congratulations on your excellent win, for your outstanding Haiku! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Elaine
Date: 2/17/2016 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Elaine George
Date: 2/17/2016 1:46:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 10:49:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this awesome haiku Elaine.
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Date: 2/17/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma, for your welcome comments. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 6:48:00 PM
Had to look up dory ... I was thinking of Finding Nemo. Lol! Congrats on the win, Elaine.
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy, I was born in New Brunswick, Canada and lived in a Fishing Village in the early years of my life. Spent time with my brother and cousin Dougie playing in the dories pulled up on Jack's Beach - most of them owned by family members. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 5:31:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thanks for your very kind comments, Sara. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Elaine
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 3:19:00 PM
Great imagery congrats on your win Elaine:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:05:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Jan. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 1:30:00 PM
So pleased to come back with congratulations, Elaine:) Well done. // paul
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Date: 2/16/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much,, Paul. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 12:49:00 PM
Congrats Elaine...good for you! B
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and for your comments, Barbara. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 12:29:00 PM
Elaine, Congratulations in Nate's "Haiku 102" contest. LINDA
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Nate'
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:03:00 PM
You are welcome, Nate. Elaine
Date: 2/16/2016 11:33:00 AM
Great visual of the seas!
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Sarita, Elaine
Date: 2/14/2016 7:40:00 PM
exactly what is portrayed, Elaine. I enjoyed the read.
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Elaine George
Date: 2/16/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Andrea. Elaine
Date: 2/12/2016 8:11:00 PM
many men will drown....sunk ships wont apologize....may they rest in peace....not familiar with dory but this was awesomely sad Elaine....;)
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and for your comments, Eric. A dory is a small wooden flat bottom boat used for fishing.
Date: 2/12/2016 5:05:00 PM
Very well inspired, Elaine. What chance does a dory stand in those mountainous waves!! gl in the contest. // paul
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 2:31:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 2/12/2016 12:43:00 PM
Great imagery through your well-chosen words, Elaine. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Sandra. Much appreciated.!
Date: 2/12/2016 11:59:00 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elaine George
Date: 2/13/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise...for your kind comments. Elaine
Date: 2/12/2016 8:25:00 AM
Very beautiful Haiku, dear Elaine!
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Elaine George
Date: 2/12/2016 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, dear Demetrios

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