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haiku 07

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haiku 07

ivy's wet  tendrils
clinging to the lattice boards...
thunder rolls

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Are you dipping into haiku Phyl, you do a rathe super job. Love what sinks into my mind with this. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 9:09:00 PM
    I really like this haiku. You have been taking lessons!!!

    Babcock Avatar Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 6/11/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks to Deb G she has been helping me out a lot on the proper way to write haiku. We have a group and are trying to learn the right way to do this short form. I cannot seem to withdraw emotionally from what I see.
  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:24:00 PM
    do not like thunder Phyllis, but I like your poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:16:00 PM
    Another one that is so descriptive of a summer thunder storms..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara