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Gypsy Rose

Every circus needs to have a side show. In the olden days you’d often see unique and wondrous sights; you should know you are reading of one now. It’s me! I read palms and Tarot cards till night, but then I loosen up and start to dance. Though I surely suffer from no stage fright, I don’t have to strip tease to entrance! I simply shimmy in my sexy clothes while swirling round; I sweetly sing and do amazing magic, for this Gypsy Rose has many ways of entertaining you. A crowd of people I can hypnotize and since I am so skilled, be wary lest you look too deeply into my green eyes, for reading souls is what I do the best! For David Williams' Circus Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/4/2015 12:46:00 AM
I love this one,,, remember the song Gypsy Woman by Brian Hyland 1970. We were 15. Always loved Cher looking gypsy too. Hey thanks for going back to Emie's poem. She was around 30 years old in May 2012 She had a bad heart. I never ask anything else !
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Date: 5/31/2012 6:37:00 PM
sounds like a trip...
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Date: 5/29/2012 9:34:00 PM
Hola!Que estas haciendo?
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Date: 5/23/2012 8:44:00 PM
very nice poem... looking forward to seeing more
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Date: 5/20/2012 9:47:00 AM
The enchantress and the fortune teller - what could be better! Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)
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Date: 5/20/2012 9:20:00 AM
did you predict a win. ms. fortune teller??.. swinging cheers to you, andie!..:) congrats and huggs!
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:12:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 5/19/2012 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:36:00 AM
Nice poem... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:51:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, I love te idea of you shimmying with the Tarot cards, you would certainly hypnotise..David
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Date: 5/12/2012 9:42:00 PM
Will try and read more later but am tired tonight-down with the flu-in fact everyone is down with the flu this week except hubby. A bummer of a week. love phyl
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Date: 5/9/2012 12:56:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Andrea. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:31:00 PM
Cute poem, Andrea....if you added a word about theives and tramps...you could enter this in the other contest!! I am struggling finding muse for both challenges!!
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:19:00 PM
love this wonderfully imaginative piece, andrea - especially love the last stanza
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Date: 5/5/2012 12:33:00 AM
A lively imaginative write Andrea,, hope you score high in the contest with this...Joe
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:24:00 AM
It's a cabaret you need, not a circus Andrea. That mesmerizing dance would surly hypnotize the crowd. Loved this peom and bet you wow David in the contest. Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 5/3/2012 3:25:00 PM
Merry Christmas. :)
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:57:00 PM
You paint it in this poem Andrea. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:36:00 PM
I remember that song some years ago by tony orlando..sweet gypsy Rose..I enjoyed your poem..good luck in the contest..love.. Joseph
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:36:00 AM
Ho ho!... You put the pictures in my mind with this one!...Ha,ha.. Very nice! :o) Shimmy-ing in the sexy clothes...Ha,ha
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Date: 5/2/2012 11:45:00 PM
Always fun to read your poetry dear Andrea. It could happen! I can see you as Gypsy Rose. This should do great in the contest.
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Date: 5/2/2012 10:40:00 PM
This is a lovely piece,Andrea
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:26:00 PM
Hey just read your comment on Lizzy's poem -- I'll go back and comment to her later tonight--- lol at church? But then, there IS a spiritual quality to her writes so I don't think "HE" would mind one little bit. Isn't it a lovely book?
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:49:00 PM
Loved the sultry feel, Andrea. Have you read Hunchback of Notre Dame. Your poem reminded me of... oh... d'oh... was it Esmerelda, I think? Mystical, elusive, part real/part illusion. Enjoyed the last line the most, and I do so love it when a poem ends on a strong note! This should place well, chum. Oh what a week...I'm TOAST.
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:12:00 PM
this comment below this one is a side show.
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