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Green Eyed Monster

I had some extra green paint Oh what can I do to make her faint So a dabbed a bit down below When in the room she came for a blow I yelled Green-eyed monster is waiting to show She fainted Notes: ok ok I saw so many poems with this topic, I said what the hell, why not!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2014 7:19:00 AM
I think you need to get that looked at. It seems to have gone a bit off. Good one! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 12/17/2014 7:25:00 PM
Next time try dipping it in green beer you may find it a happier ending!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:48:00 PM
Oh Richard, and waste good Irish beer? :)
Date: 12/17/2014 7:23:00 PM
I guess this is one stiff that wasn't cold. Thanks for rising to the challange! Good luck in the contest.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 8:36:00 PM
There's a contest for this sort of thing? My that is kinky!
Date: 12/15/2014 11:34:00 AM
Love the humor in this. love phyl
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, a bit risque but I could not resist!
Date: 12/14/2014 4:35:00 PM
Like your humour, Arthur!!! Are you sure her reaction was all due to the colour!:) // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:47:00 PM
LOL Paul!!! Cheers
Date: 12/14/2014 2:28:00 PM
Hello Arthur now this is close to the bone ha ha....nice to read your work again...David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:46:00 PM
LOL David, funny, nice to see you here, and I hope you will not be a stranger! Good to see you again!
Date: 12/14/2014 1:16:00 PM
: )..What did you eat for dinner to be inspiredin such a way : ).Lol!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:45:00 PM
More like what was I drinking!!!! :)
Date: 12/14/2014 12:47:00 PM
smiling really enjoyable vision painted arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:44:00 PM
Thank you lian, laughter is always a winner!
Date: 12/14/2014 11:36:00 AM
oh boy oh boy oh boy. hahaha
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:43:00 PM
That's what she said too!!!!! ( before she fainted )
Date: 12/14/2014 9:58:00 AM
lol - why not indeed soup could do with a huge injection of humour! Hugs jan xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:42:00 PM
Laughter makes the world go round! Sadness makes the poet drown.
Date: 12/14/2014 9:45:00 AM
Well that's witty Arthur! Fun real fun!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/17/2014 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Upma A. Sharma!

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