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Gothic Romance

In a state of high excitement she prepared for the Gothic party Dressed in jet black from head to toe with nails and lips shining black Arriving at the Gothic mansion a shiver ran down her spine evil gargoyles grinned at her seeming ready to take flight On entering the lights were black candles casting gruesome shadows in every corner standing near the edge of the dance floor she felt intense eyes staring at her He was dressed in dashing Byronic style as he gave her a stately and elegant bow catching up her hand he swirled her round holding her so close his eyes devouring They danced the night away together both were smitten by the flame of love as dawn struck the mansion bathing it her lover vanished in a puff of smoke Realizing her lover to be lost until the dark of night returns she decides to be one with him to walk only in the dark of night Gladly when he returns she accepts his kiss knowing that she leaves light far behind as she enters into his world of perpetual darkness written 10/18/2013 contest Gothic or Romance

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Date: 10/23/2013 4:56:00 PM
I love this poem, Shadow! Very dark, gothic, and romantic! Wonderful work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you so much for the great comments!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 5:13:00 PM
Ty Kelly for your nice review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/23/2013 12:42:00 PM
Shadow, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 5:12:00 PM
hi Skat and ty hugs Shadow x smile
Date: 10/23/2013 7:54:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 11:05:00 AM
hi Richard and ty it was fun Shadow x smile
Date: 10/22/2013 10:00:00 PM
I really like your win...LINDA
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 11:06:00 AM
hi Linda and ty so pleased you like it
Date: 10/22/2013 7:27:00 PM
congrats on your win Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 11:07:00 AM
hi Joseph very much appreciate Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/18/2013 5:00:00 PM
Wow this was cool! my only question is why was he wearing a byronic style dress? Sorry I couldn't resist, you may wish to add an s to he. Other than that small typo this is fantastic. I could really feel the passion in this piece.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2013 5:46:00 PM
I thought you meant dress as in a woman's dress, so I wanted you to place an S in front of he. Now I understand what you are saying. *lol*
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/18/2013 5:19:00 PM
Byronic is a goth style very popular over here Richard no reason to resist a little humour helps lol soup mail Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/18/2013 9:57:00 AM
Loved this one, refreshing verses and ideas for me :) hug, Yanny
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/18/2013 3:54:00 PM
hi Yanny I am pleased it gave you ideas Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/18/2013 5:43:00 AM
Captivating the imagination making it run wild! Excellent story!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/18/2013 3:52:00 PM
hi Demetrios glad it caught your imagination Ty for reading Shadow x smile

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