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My husband took our son for surgery in Dublin this morn..I had a few minutes out on the porch..It was as if God had orchestrated this morn for me..I could see His hands at work..
God orchestrated this morning for me Set the music in place to accompany A sunrise I longed for but yet to see Sand color ribbon interspersed epiphany Each second there's a change in the music Colors of the sky, gray overtakes some Bright fushia, making dull instead of brick Sun makes a jet stream become like chrome All the instruments of the orchestra Constantly change while the roosters' steady Beat keeps a harmony that others get Join in to sing and play willingly ready Thank you God for the beauty of the morn And lesson__in a second gray is born...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/3/2012 9:51:00 AM
An uplifting piece you have penned Sara. Want to wish you and your family a very Happy Easter. love phyl
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Date: 4/1/2012 6:49:00 AM
Heart touching words! Blessings to you! JP
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Date: 3/26/2012 7:58:00 PM
Sand color ribbon interspersed epiphany... WOW, a multitude of expression this poem consist Sara. a very thoughtful write. thanks for stopping by and your kind comments
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Date: 3/22/2012 10:16:00 AM
the sun sing a solo as the mountians hum the verse, the birds cherp the melodies, just as they rehursed.
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Date: 3/22/2012 9:10:00 AM
this is so unique, Sara. in fact only you could have written this. just wonderful. harry
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Date: 3/21/2012 6:07:00 AM
beautiful descriptive and uplifting sonnet, my friend
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Date: 3/20/2012 11:31:00 PM
This is unique and reminds me a lot of old-gold sonneteer. Thank you for this.
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:26:00 PM
a most glorious ensembe of a choral morning, sara... what joy your images bring.. best of wishes and huggs.. i liek! seems that karter is your muse..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/20/2012 11:20:00 AM
God has orchestrated inspiration for a lovely poem, Sara. Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/20/2012 9:23:00 AM
Sara, very well composed.. how you described God's hand in magical change of morning sky and everything joining in the orchestral swing and there's this beautiful final line. Enjoyed today this ethereal glow..love, gautami
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Date: 3/20/2012 8:19:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Sara. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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