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God's Kind of Poetry

he crawls in the filth, struggles to climb, finding a convenient spot he branches out. begins...perhaps  the most baffling of all processes. when done...dormant. he will be prey for predators of all kinds as time passes,  as minutes count the hours...the hours the days he beats the odds, success is his. the dirty crawler who gives even 'Jocks' the willies, the heebee jeebees, starts his exit from his rented home. just a bit, then more...then wings opened...the crawler emerges, a colorful...one of nature's most beautiful creations ...as you stare with disbelief, A Butterfly  ...crafted with rainbow borrowed shades. as he is in you, so you know this is God's poetry.   one of God's rich, layered writes "The Beauty and The Beast"."The Ugly Duckling"... ...and his children the human poet evolves by osmosis. God's kind of poetry  pastes smiles in the core of young and old. ...ah but in children's laughter joy like they've never known. his masterfully written poetry...approved by all.  In prayer we herald the poet's name.

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Date: 10/23/2014 11:43:00 PM
Your poem just leaves me in awe Maurice! Congratulations on your well deserved win! #7
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:42:00 PM
Grats on your contest win! great job sweetheart!
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Date: 10/17/2014 11:10:00 PM
Wow Maurice this is so amazing my friend! congrats on top place win, you leave us all in awe!
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:45:00 PM
Congratz on your win! Such a nice poem!
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:56:00 PM
This is the kind of poetry that makes you stand out as a great poet Maurice. I find this a brilliant masterpiece. I need to fav this so I don't forget about it. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:21:00 PM
I just love this. Congratulations and God bless you. Love and prayers and happy writing ~ Gina
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:23:00 PM
You told it like it is my friend. You surprised me with the contents flow! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Maurice! Excellent take on this theme in which you display God's gift for golden words that flow through your pen. Well done! a 7 rating. // paul
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:28:00 AM
This contest elicited the most beautiful poetry and this is another top one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:01:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Maurice.
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:06:00 AM
Nicely composed and equally worded well poem, congrats on the win, Maurice
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:08:00 AM
Beautifully penned Maurice many congrats on your win:-0 hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:00:00 AM
What a wonderful description of God's handiwork. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2014 4:45:00 AM
My friend Maurice, the great craftsman has taken his time when your pen was preparing! Good luck on the contest!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/2/2014 5:25:00 AM
thank you my friend.
Date: 9/30/2014 1:59:00 PM
Very beautifully written Maurice. Good luck in the contest.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/2/2014 5:24:00 AM
thank you Brenda.
Date: 9/29/2014 3:59:00 PM
Love it Maurice. Such a different take on the contest. I also like the line Andrea quoted. :) Good luck, my friend.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, you are always supportive.
Date: 9/29/2014 3:22:00 PM
wow, I loved your approach with this poem. and this line: ...crafted with rainbow borrowed shades. (GREAT imagery!) You really hit a home run with this poem, methinks. A SEVEN!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:52:00 PM
Wow, I'm having a déjà vu.
Date: 9/29/2014 3:22:00 PM
wow, I loved your approach with this poem. and this line: ...crafted with rainbow borrowed shades. (GREAT imagery!) You really hit a home run with this poem, methinks. A SEVEN!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:51:00 PM
Why thank you!
Date: 9/29/2014 2:23:00 PM
You are one of God's favourite chapters dear friend.He blessed you with such a gift of words.Yes God loves the ugly duckling,and for him I am sure She is as beautiful or more thsn the rest,and even the beast.I wish I could love the way He does,with no prejudice to all.What an amazing poem.How I want to know more about this kind of God.Mine and yours.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Char I am glad you call me friend because I feel the same about you. A good friend.
Date: 9/29/2014 2:22:00 PM
Morphed into beauty my friend...cheers
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:48:00 PM
True enough Tim, I love those words for the content of my poem "morphed into beauty"
Date: 9/29/2014 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Maurice, "God's poetry" would be nice for people to see through your eyes of art that God truly has made from the ugly duckling into the beautiful swan :) eve
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:46:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to visit me Eve. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 9/29/2014 11:55:00 AM
- Music, poetry and beauty of nature is inextricably linked with love - A beautiful poem Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/29/2014 6:44:00 PM
It always brightens my day when you visit Anne-Lise

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