God Filled Country Visual 7

GOD FILLED COUNTRY # Visual 7 We will make this God filled country our eternal abode He paints every dust of my heart in red and yellow flowers We will lie together silent smelling the innocent grass Glorious Sijo Fields - Poetry Contest Sponsor Andrea Dietrich

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:46:00 PM

Rajat, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 2/15/2015 9:58:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful descriptive win, Rajat. 7 Blessings dear friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2015 3:43:00 PM

Great work that you have penned in this winner..Congats..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:30:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/8/2015 1:59:00 PM

A beautiful piece deserving of a beautiful win! Warmest regards. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:24:00 AM

I really like this one, congratulations!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 7:57:00 AM

Beautiful sijo, Rajat. You catch well the essence of this visual; the final line captivates!! #7 Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 1:10:00 AM

Rajat. I really loved the message of this poem. the "innocent grass" is a really wonderful part of the sijo. If you had used a different word than dust, this would have scored much higher!!! Congratulations. Soupmail.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/8/2015 4:14:00 AM