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As evening hangs near, wrapped in silk cashmere It bathes the frontier with godliness dear… Winged robins I hear chanting psalms that steer Moonbeams to appear like glazed lull, revere That my doubt severe washes a cold tear; Abating night’s fear… snuggling heaven’s cheer. ~*~ Rhymers Delight—Internal Rhymes For John Hamilton dated 1.07.2017 Checked: www.howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 1/15/2017 10:00:00 AM
So absolutely wonderful, it flows as if no effort is made! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2017 3:15:00 PM
Well earned win! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 1/11/2017 8:07:00 PM
Congrats, very well written
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Date: 1/11/2017 3:11:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, Nette. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/10/2017 11:32:00 PM
Beautiful! Many Congrats!
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Date: 1/10/2017 4:20:00 PM
Lovely, Nette!
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Date: 1/10/2017 3:04:00 PM
Back with fresh applause, Nette:) Congratulations for placing first! hugs // paul
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Date: 1/10/2017 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 1/10/2017 5:37:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Nette:) congratulations on your top win with this heavenly write:) a 7:)
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Date: 1/9/2017 11:28:00 PM
It's a fave for me. You do it every time in such a talented way. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:33:00 PM
Each line is sublime. Great descriptions. Congrats on your top win, Nette.
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:18:00 PM
Perfect and beautiful:-) congratulations on your win Hugs
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Date: 1/9/2017 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Nette.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thanks Nette you really delivered a beautiful poem congrats on number 1
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Date: 1/9/2017 7:53:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your First Place win for this awesome poem! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/7/2017 1:22:00 PM
Wow! Perfection! Good luck in the contest. I love your work...this and others.
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Date: 1/7/2017 11:01:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - *** Happy birthday dear friend !!! *** - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2017 8:15:00 AM
Very lovely, Nette; you never fail to deliver! Both content and rhyme are worthy of applause. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/7/2017 7:10:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful dear, nette! Hugs and a big seven!
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:26:00 PM
This is beautiful nette. It reads like a winner. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:13:00 PM
Hi Nette, how I love these little mono rhyme's, they are so sweet and this one is no exception, beautifully written Nette, keep them coming. Take care........Vera
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Date: 1/6/2017 6:55:00 PM
awesome monorhyme Nette this will be a hard act to follow:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/6/2017 6:23:00 PM
my goodness, what a good model of how it is to be done. I need to start mine right away. Gotta find a rhyme that can go ten times!!! You did great, Nette.
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Date: 1/6/2017 4:55:00 PM
Nette, no wonder so many people love you.
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Date: 1/6/2017 4:56:00 PM
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Date: 1/6/2017 4:52:00 PM
Splendid monorhyme, nette. Very soft, as perhaps a children's goodnight poem. Wonderful:)
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