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Giving Decency a Voice

In the dreary tune of a city's groan, when streets escape the raging claws of haggard breaths, a line of stars blink trading some warmth with human arms... beyond sighing notes the dusk possesses, there are more wrists handcuffed on tainted steel of unjust labor for children and women who toil beyond midnight hours. A single violin strain bites the screeches of grief and pain, of humanity rendered in ruins wrapped in tattered gauze: outlines of freezing shapes coiling in fetal postures, and they swallow a victim's blood, wondering, if the god of freedom star can restore power of life where mangled lungs cry in despise. Yet, the candle burns inside their hearts to feed dire hunger of jailed souls as the will to plod an inner odyssey blazes, searching for some need to give this slavery a voice: that birthright of choice ordained by one divine, universal law... the kind that fires the oneness of all mornings. ............................. Cyndi MacMillan's I Can't Breathe... Contest by nette onclaud ~ Currently, the Human Rights of many women and children are violated in Asia. There are women who are victims of sexual exploitation under military dictatorship, and children who become involved in human trafficking and are forced to work. ~http://hrn.or.jp/eng/g-activity/activista/

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:30:00 PM
Nice voicing this topic Nette, it was nice seeing Cyndi's "I CAN'T BREATHE, generous list." Hope you enjoyed the showcase of this powerful contest theme, thank you for sharing the message. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:07:00 PM
Hmm, A lot to consider here Nette, a whole world was built on slavery, and its still here..' even in the western world, speaking about the disease is probably the best initial action, which should lead to direct action..' (well done)
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:11:00 PM
Now this is powerful poetry! Well done.
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:45:00 AM
love how you drew this nette i can relate to this piece dear pal excellent pen justice in the next world for those who judge will see truth powerful write
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:07:00 AM
a stark reminder Nette of the suffering of others. Sometimes it amazes me how a handful of people can wield such power over others great pen hugs 7
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:47:00 PM
A moving piece, Nette...powerful yet tender words of protest. Thanks for bringing awareness...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:37:00 PM
Beyond beautiful in it's honest power...extremely moving
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:24:00 AM
Powerful write -- may we always seek together social justice -- helping our neighbor -- with hearts filled with a love, arms willing to reach out, legs to carry us to the needy. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:38:00 AM
A horrible reality so well penned Nette. This world is so cruel to many. My heart aches for them.
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:39:00 AM
Your excellent writing paints a picture of inequality and its despairing darkness while the world still turns. But even in such a place you offer some hope to the fallen and your whole piece is in that one truly powerful poem, Nette! I admire your talent!
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:15:00 AM
I thought the third stanza stood out the most within your tremendous write my friend! I really loved reading your wondrous poem here this morning! You have written on a subject that needs more attention within the world today! This is a travesty what happens where women are degraded and used as things instead of human beings, that are loving are capable of giving hope to anyone just like anyone else! I love that you touched on this today, I feel it being very important to me as well! Great Work!
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:02:00 AM
Such a big poem, for such a big subject. The feeling of longing that you bring out in this piece, so strong and tangible. A well crafted poem. Best of luck in the comp.
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:47:00 AM
An amplified voice of concern for the rights of our fellow humans that are unjustly treated presented here in verse divine! May your cry of love be heard allover the world, dear Nette and justice should prevail! God bless you! Merry Christmas. Hugs and love plus a seven!
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