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Get Me Out of Here

Today has to be the strangest day of my life, the arms that hold me tight say that I'm his wife. I wish I could feel something for this stranger, I'm so scared and terrified I feel like my life is in danger. Who is the man? How did I get here? Why does he look at me like that? He almost seems sincere. Oh my God there it is again an overwhelming feeling of fear, My head is screaming really loud get me out of here. Who am I? Who is he? I can't be his wife because I don't even know him or me....... Alexis Y.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2016 3:57:00 PM

A very heart wrenching poem, Alexis. You wrote a powerhouse of a poem. The person in the poem seems to having night terrors, anxiety attacks or something along that order, I may be wrong. Strong emotional poem. A 7 no doubt and a fave. Love always.

Patrice Trice Jackson

Date: 11/4/2016 9:37:00 PM

Im speechless the way you flow the words through this poet took me back to place real quick in thank God I don't live there. This is a classic. Art is a beautiful thing in can move you in a million and one ways... Touched.

Ordinary May

Date: 10/9/2016 9:37:00 PM

Nice to read this clever poem of yours Alexis!

John Hamilton

Date: 7/29/2016 9:53:00 PM

Congrats on Potd was a good write, reminds me of the movie 50 first dates, woman with amnesia, nice write very entertaining!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/11/2016 6:18:00 PM

I see I am late to the party! First congrats on POTD, and second, what an amazing poem, that last line is so good!

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/9/2016 3:07:00 PM

Hello Alexis, I guess I missed this one. A Big Congratulations to you on the POTD honor!! Way to Go!! I'm proud of you!! Spill Ink Always, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 2:46:00 PM

I have a friend that has a father who was married for 70 years. He lost his short term memory and said to his wife, you aren't my wife...she doesn't glasses. It was so sad to have happen after all those happy years they spent together.Your poem made me recall their story. Heartbreaking! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2016 5:14:00 PM

oh come on, you big tease, you won't tell me if i was right? hahaha. Carry on, then, my friend!!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/9/2016 9:47:00 AM

Hi Andrea, Lol! I wrote in such a way for the reader to make their own interpretation: -) Alexis

Manmath Dalei

Date: 7/8/2016 1:38:00 AM

This is stupendous. A big congrats from my side for this well deserving POTD. Wish u all the best...........//:) with love.

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/8/2016 1:47:00 AM

Hi Manmath, Thank you so much for such a kind comment. I appreciate that you came by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Frederick Espiritu

Date: 7/7/2016 11:50:00 PM

nice portray... nice work...

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 11:53:00 PM

Hi Frederick, Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that it got P.O.T.D. I appreciate that you stopped by: -) Alexis

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 7/7/2016 10:06:00 PM

Oddly fear will either weaken or even greatly empower! Congrats on this POTD!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 10:27:00 PM

Hi Walter, I agree, fear can either make you weak or very strong. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Michelle Corbin

Date: 7/7/2016 6:15:00 PM

This is comic, I like it! Congrats on having this poem featured in Poem Of The Day!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 6:20:00 PM

Hi Michelle, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Janet Runyan

Date: 7/7/2016 4:26:00 PM

I love this one.

Janet Runyan
Date: 7/7/2016 4:44:00 PM

You truly deserve to get pots. You wrote a really great piece. It reminds me of my marriage lol

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 4:42:00 PM

Hi Janet, Thank you so much. I'm so elated that it got P.O.T.D. I appreciate that you stopped by today: -) Alexis

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2016 2:51:00 PM

Sinister, but this is happening every minute of the day somewhere. I like the last line, where she has lost her identity. Probably via a control freak. Great write, Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 4:45:00 PM

Hi Viv, It's good to see you. Lol! She could be a control freak. I'm so excited it got P.O.T.D. I appreciate that you stopped by today: -)Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/7/2016 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis for POTD honors...

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:17:00 PM

Hi Charlie, Thank you so much. It is indeed an honor. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2016 12:47:00 PM

gosh so deep and dark Alexis congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:20:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much for stopping by to congratulate me :-) Alexis

Justin Worthy

Date: 7/7/2016 12:02:00 PM

I can see why it got POTD..it's deep dark and real..I love the imagery cinema that's involved as the story progresses. Congrats :-) Love-JW

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 1:21:00 PM

Hi Justin, Thank you so much for such a kind and encouraging comment. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/7/2016 8:13:00 AM

Very deep and sad, Alexis, and open to interpretation on different levels. Congratulations on your poem honored as Poem Of The Day. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 11:19:00 AM

Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I appreciate you stopping to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/7/2016 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on POTD. My interpretation is of someone who has a psychosis of some sort. Very deep write.

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 11:24:00 AM

Hi Daniel, Thank you so much. I wrote in a way for the reader to make their own interpretation. I appreciate that you stopped to congratulate me: -) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2016 5:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 11:16:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, WoW! I got poem of the day? Thanks for being the first to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2016 4:20:00 PM

This is expressive in depicting a sad situation in life; not one that we would want to be in, but then some things could so easily get beyond our control! ~ Best regards, Alexis. // paul

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 10:09:00 PM

Hi Paul, Thank you so much for such a thoughtful comment. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 2:22:00 PM

Alexis. I interpret this one as a woman with dementia. Did I get it right? Well done . Also thanks for reading my poems while i was away. I have a ton of catching up to do now. OH MY!!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2016 10:13:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I wrote in a way that the reader can make their interpretation. It was my pleasure you are one of my favorite writers on the soup. I'm glad you're back and thanks for stopping by:-) Alexis