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Gentlest of Fresh Leaves

This is my one love and when it will die I might as well drift by the alley’s wayside Or care for young leaves which are my pride, That only bluebirds from frosty air cry . Soon, I’ll hear old winter’s song through dusk’s lyre Climbing on stars, my breaths moaning aloud; To watch day’s procession through a head bowed When twilight dims a moon, frail like kohl’s pyre Yet in this secular autumn I know I have felt his pure warmth open life's heart; This kindled fervor, only to depart… Yet evenings bloom on a sepulcher, aglow Mellow like fresh leaves when times past enthrall, Gentlest of all, my love, gentlest of all. ----------------- For Gren’s Evergreens (Golden Oldies) # 2 Contest ----------4/30/2016 Inspiration from the song, Autumn Leaves Petrarchan Sonnet

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Date: 5/25/2016 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on your Golden Oldies playing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those oldies impressive..Sara
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Date: 5/24/2016 12:45:00 PM
Excellent work on your poem and win in the Golden Oldie #2 contest. Congrats! - Jesse
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Date: 5/23/2016 11:54:00 AM
Beautifully created Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 5/23/2016 7:37:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your number one win!
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Date: 5/23/2016 6:02:00 AM
Congrats on your rhythmical win..Sara
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Date: 5/2/2016 4:25:00 PM
Hi Nette, the art is in, as Victor says, capturing the image. You do this so well with your poetry, you are able to capture the essence of moments with your gentle words. You take us into the heart of your scene, your words painting a canvas of such peaceful scenes. A beautiful Sonnet Nette, written so gently with Love and care. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/1/2016 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/30/2016 10:38:00 PM
I came to read this again, these verse's resonate so well with my thoughts at the moment!
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Date: 4/30/2016 2:44:00 PM
Captivating poem! I got carried by a stream, of melodious language and the beauty of love's meaning , its passing, touched me!
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:55:00 PM
Oh Nette, I just love this sonnet. You really have a true gift dear lady..good luck it will place very high I just know it! be blessed, :)-luloo
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Date: 4/30/2016 5:43:00 AM
A captivating sonnet! Who can expect anything less from you dear, nette? A seven!
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Date: 4/30/2016 4:33:00 AM
Nice sonnet with amazing ending. A7 from me.............hugs
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Date: 4/30/2016 2:38:00 AM
Seems like I can feel all those sweet echoing words...quite lovely, nette. Good luck for the contest. hugs. ;)
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:57:00 AM
Loved this, I find it amazing such different styles of poetry sometimes intersect! :)
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:39:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet!
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